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I found myself confused beyond belief when I first read chapters 1 and 2, but after I left the story and came back to it, it made much more sense. It is a very interesting story! It is a bit heavy on the reader to figure out what the hell is going on but that's not necessarily a bad thing. It stimulates a reader who is willing to think and work his or her brain. This story is one of those stories that would be one I would favorite but not recommend to certain people. I seriously enjoyed it though, and found it entertaining yet dramatic and angsty at the same time. Good luck with chapter three! Ummm, by the way, I am eternally curious as to if Youko Kurama is still a fully separate entity of conscience in Shuuichi Kurama, and if so I would love to see a bit about what he thinks and his reactions, especially to Yomi's 'treatment'. I hope chapter three clears up exactly what the virus is; is it Youko Kurama himself, or just the transformation into a body that no longer exists accompanied by the mixed up memories and psyche of Shuuichi Kurama. Anyway, I wish you luck and I'll be awaiting your update of this story!

It's a very intriguing story! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Very interesting take.

I like how you had Kurama feel alienated from his human body- it was very haunting.

This was like poetry, I swear. I love the repetition of form and phrase. It flowed so beautifully, and the "something stirred" line was a perfect transition between scenes and a perfect way to end the chapter. I also like the idea for this, that Youko is kind of like a virus. That, in a way, he causes Kurama's "illness," which seemed less like illness and more like sexual frustration until the end. Oh I wish he'd have just continued that action with Hiei!

Update this soon, please! I can't wait to see what you do with the other two chapters!

Liked the viewpoint. Liked the way you came full circle: same writing pattern/style at the beginning and end. It's nice to see your stuff again. MISS YOU, THOTH.

DUNE REFERENCE TO SANDTROUT AND LETO II'S VISION! Wahahahaha, your fics make me happy. xD I get slightly distracted by the awesome literary allusions. Ehehehehe.

Good writing, here. Sort of dreamlike. Heh, Kurama eating raw meat, and being all mixed-up inside. And the yaoi that almost was. And Hiei being IC, and being concerned and then actually sounding concerned for a millisecond. Ahaha. Love it. Looking forward to more chapters, but this would've stood as a oneshot on its own, quite well. :3

(FREAKING DUNE REFERENCE~! Wheeeeeeeeeeeeheehee, and Kurama-Suuichi's just the sort of geek who would read Western literature so as to avoid getting too bored in Ningenkai... x3!)

There's my old buddy. I've been missing your reviews in my new stories. I have a monster series going on in the General area right now. This story was a bit "high brow' with some of the words and stuff, but I think I got it. Just would've liked to have seen it go a bit farther with Hiei (wink wink, lol). But I'll be sure to read the next installment. Glad to have your talent back, though.