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for Hiei's Harem - Pt 11 - Asserting

by 66Hiei08

schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry i have been so busy i barely had time 2 read the latest chapters wow 4 and i love them....i really like how you used the question i asked you in the story...it so sad to read a about poor gam....but i know hiei won't let him die........GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep yp the Great work looking foward to more.
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow i love my part in this and can't wait to see it develop.....great job and i hope sylk doesn't die but get's a better additude to hiei for saving her.....poor eboni thinks hiei doesn't want here if she only knew.....oh btw who's baby is it that tachi is caring yusuke's or kurama's although i favor red heads i love them both...:D oh what is happening with them anyway? will they ever find out about the babies or will hiei rasie them as his own?.......great chapter oh and i noticed how tachi seems to be the mothering type is that just her instincts since shes pregers or is it on purpose........can't wait for more.
person Asher990
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Already on sequel 11! You sure do work fast! Anyway, love your stories. There quite interesting and funny.
person POHness1
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahaha! another ruler down. ^_^ this is getting way too interesting.

plz continue. ^_^
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters....hiei is slowly but surely becoming the ultamite alpha weather he want's to or not.
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow a great start to another installment......i am so glad dagon got his desire and wish sated.....and what a way to start a new chapter......wow....great job i can't wait for more.
person POHness1
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
my goodness, hiei's pack is growing large! i wonder what the reactions of the other mates will be...

i plan to read this story for as long as y ou plan to continue. its WAAAAAY too interesting to ignore. ^_^

plz continue. ^_^
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I giggled. I really did. I've been waiting for those two to do it for a while now. Mean ol' Hiei is just stubborn.

Can't wait for more!!!