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for Hiei's Harem - Pt 11 - Asserting

by 66Hiei08

person POHness1
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* i know that he needed to mark the kids so that they would live, and i hope that they dont hate him too much for it. at least he can do the same thing with them as he did with Silis and Gamaru, so that if they find someone to love they can be with them. still, i guess we will have to see.

as far as the new group of villains, i hope they dont cause too much of an annoyance. no guarantees, i know, but still.

im looking forward to the rest. plz continue. ^_^
person POHness1
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww, thats kinda sad. I liked Gamaru, but... if he really wanted to die...
the world is cruel, is it not?
oh well. i guess we will see what happens.

plz continue. ^_^
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Gamaru is going to dye how could you......i could hardly finish the story because when he said accept it i just started crying my eyes out.......great chapter.
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow so much to read sorry i have been really busy with upcoming test and studying and work i hardly get the time to read i am glad to see that there back and helping gamaru still want to see how they will act with the other females..great job
person POHness1
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay, you almost have 400 reviews! thats great. ^_^

i love hoe hiei gives them the chance to stay in their home territories... although he may just be trying to get rid of some of the trouble. lol

i cant wait til he gets back to his ravine. im sure the homecoming will be better than it would have been if Sylk was still with them.

plz continue. ^_^
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i say celabrate....i love that fact tachi has a brother ther interaction reminds me of my little brother that was cool.....i still can't wait to see how the others will react to the new females.....and what will yusuke and kurama do when they find out about the babies or will they?....great job
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great Job!!! sorry this review is so short but i am late for school....bye
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!!!!!!!! Wow that was well worth the wait cookies and cakes to you for a job done greatly.....got to go in class altough a friend of mine was reading with me and you gave her a nosebleed i think shes hooked know.....thumbs way up!!!!!! when i told her that tachi was my name on here she freaked and wants her own now.....uh oh the teacher is coming got really go great job.....Bye4Now.
person POHness1
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
man, Sylk is getting on my nerves. she needs to get over herself. reaally quick, before she gets herself killed or whatnot.

at least the rest of the group seems like a nicer bunch. i thought it was nice that they wanted to know about Kurama and Yusuke. and thank god he is close to getting back to the ravine. i wonder what will happen. hm...

plz continue ^_^
schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I have very much been enjoying your story.
However, because of some personal stuff I wont be reading any more for quite some time.
I hope to one day have the oportunity to find this story line again and read all you have written.
But life is funny that way.
Any way keep up the wonderful work, I have very much enjoyed following you thus far on this journey.
Happy writing.
Legilmyth