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August 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You are such a good writer. I have read this story several times, and each time, I cannot help but laugh along and even cry along. You are fantastic. I actually read this story on Fanfiction.net first, then I found it again on here. I loved it so much, I didn't even bother to see if there was a difference. Not that it matters. Great story line, even the epilogue at the end was nice. Brava
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December 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved your story. I never actually thought that Hiei and Yusuke made a cute couple but you have changed my mind in your final chapter. That is how friends and lovers should be. Never giving up on love no matter what has happened to the couple. Please write another story with Youko and Hiei! You have a talent that I respect. Loved the story, LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT!!!!! Lol sorry I just appreciate a good story.
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February 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
IT's amazing what a bit of trolling for old fandoms can do ^_^ 1st YYH story I've read for about 10 years and it's a little epic ^_^ it's nice to see this fandom is still breathing a little, makes me itch to write another FF myself :S so here I am watching the series again and hunting for more ficts ^_^
Great story!!, loves ever juicy second of it (winced a little at the Epilogue, sorry :S) but I'm a sucker for some H/C of ANY kind.
Thank you for restarting a beloved fandom for me ^_^
Great story!!, loves ever juicy second of it (winced a little at the Epilogue, sorry :S) but I'm a sucker for some H/C of ANY kind.
Thank you for restarting a beloved fandom for me ^_^
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June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this so very much KuramaXHiei is done so much but rarely is it done well enough to be called good. I delight in the pairing and it made me happy in this because it was my favorite and it was sweet and good stuff more then usual
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May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just thought I'd write a proper review since I did enjoy reading your story (which is rare for me since I am fairly critical). I liked the concept/plot, the well-written narrative, and the depth you executed in your characterization. The pain your main characters suffered when dealing with the loss of the other felt very real as you were able to pinpoint exactly what sort of gut-wrenching narrative would best convey the sentiments. My favorite part of the story was the characterization of Kurama as a fox sleeping under Hiei's window as he tries to prove to Hiei that he is sorry and serious about love.
A few minor points I thought I would point out that would make reading a little smoother (I promise no flames, just suggestions):
1. The direct address comma: This was the most prevalent point. I noticed it was there sometimes, but usually it was MIA. (eg. Corrections for Ch.2: "You did that on purpose, Hiei" or "Relax, Fox." or "No, Mother, I'm sorry she's not.")
2. Keiko's last name: 'Ukimora' should be >> 'Yukimura'
3. Inconsistent Romanization: You have Kurama's human name as 'Shuuichi' (with the extra 'u' for the elongated syllable) and 'youki', but not for 'Yusuke' or 'Yoko' (though the 'Yoko' is sometimes written as 'Youko')
4. Genkai's former fighting partner: (Ch. 4) 'Taguro' >> 'Toguro'
5. "effected" >> "affected" (Ch. 9, 17)
6. "Jagon" >> "jagan"? (Ch. 17)
7. "Mozuku" >> "Mazoku"? (Epilogue) "mozuku" is this slimy seaweed that looks like green somen noodles.
Like I said, these are just are just minor things in case you were looking for constructive feedback. The story itself was extremely well-written and I gave it the highest rating. If it was not my place to point these out, please forgive the intrusion. Thank you for putting in the time to put your creative thoughts to paper.
A few minor points I thought I would point out that would make reading a little smoother (I promise no flames, just suggestions):
1. The direct address comma: This was the most prevalent point. I noticed it was there sometimes, but usually it was MIA. (eg. Corrections for Ch.2: "You did that on purpose, Hiei" or "Relax, Fox." or "No, Mother, I'm sorry she's not.")
2. Keiko's last name: 'Ukimora' should be >> 'Yukimura'
3. Inconsistent Romanization: You have Kurama's human name as 'Shuuichi' (with the extra 'u' for the elongated syllable) and 'youki', but not for 'Yusuke' or 'Yoko' (though the 'Yoko' is sometimes written as 'Youko')
4. Genkai's former fighting partner: (Ch. 4) 'Taguro' >> 'Toguro'
5. "effected" >> "affected" (Ch. 9, 17)
6. "Jagon" >> "jagan"? (Ch. 17)
7. "Mozuku" >> "Mazoku"? (Epilogue) "mozuku" is this slimy seaweed that looks like green somen noodles.
Like I said, these are just are just minor things in case you were looking for constructive feedback. The story itself was extremely well-written and I gave it the highest rating. If it was not my place to point these out, please forgive the intrusion. Thank you for putting in the time to put your creative thoughts to paper.
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February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh that's so sad and sweet at the same time!!! Very nice!!! I can't wait until your next story!!!
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February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Though I'm sure you don't want to for a while,I look forward to your next Hiei/Kurama or Yusuke/Hiei/Kurama
story. You do so well at the longer sory lines and are great at bringing out all kinds of emotions.
Well done as always
story. You do so well at the longer sory lines and are great at bringing out all kinds of emotions.
Well done as always
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February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww!!! that was pretty cute... im glad you had it that way though... i love how you had yusuke and Hiei get together like promised... it finished it perfectly :)
i hope life smooths out for you dear! i can't wait to read more of your fics! they are among the best YYH fics i have ever read and you are one of my favorite authors!
i hope life smooths out for you dear! i can't wait to read more of your fics! they are among the best YYH fics i have ever read and you are one of my favorite authors!
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February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The ending was so powerful, you made me cry.
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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love all your stories.
I am glad you plan to continue writing when
inspiration hits. Whether its long or a one
shot matters not its just so wonderful to be
able to read your stories.
thank you so much.
May inspiration visit you often
all my best
a big fan
I am glad you plan to continue writing when
inspiration hits. Whether its long or a one
shot matters not its just so wonderful to be
able to read your stories.
thank you so much.
May inspiration visit you often
all my best
a big fan