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April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yay! An update! I was afraid you abandoned this or something. T.T But from my memory, this is doing a lot better than the first person view. It's much easier to visualize. You're doing a good job. ^.^ Can't wait to read the next installment.
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April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yeah an update i thought you have forgotten all about the story,glad i check for updates also will this be on FF.net as well or will it stay on AFF.net only.
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September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, that guy from Yuusuke's past is going to pop up anytime now, I know it! O_O! It's almost like a frickin horror movie! -Hides under a blanket.- oo; Very nice though. =] I like it bunches and can't wait to read more. I escpecially like how you've added some comedy with the angst. -Nods.-
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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and am terribly intrigued as to where it is going. I never read the original version. Hope to read more soon. ^_^
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know...I had originally thought you had completely died on us but I'm glad you haven't. *hugs* I first read this story on FF.net (I sat down and did it all in an hour or so to) and was really sad to see it not updated. I'm glad that you've picked this up again and can't wait to see more. ^_^
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow im glad to see this story is up and running again
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story seems pretty good. Even with the mistakes. But, you lost and confused me when Yusuke got shot. You stated he was shot twice and that the lady saved him. But, you didn't say how or why Yusuke wasn't bleeding or stitched up. No one can be fine and dandy after being shot twice. Please, state why he was suddenly all healed up so quickly.
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I remember reading this before. The fact that you're redoing it and giving me the chance to read it again makes me happy. ^.^ I'm looking forward to reading more. You're doing a great job!
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I want to know will this be a Kurama/Hiei/Yusuke (whatever order you have it) also i want to is the story on ff.net will it be discontinue are but in hold. other then that i can wait to see the changes being made.
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Keep going please! I could easily see this as a prologue for the series. You also have a way of writing that doesn't get tiring. Awesome!