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Hi, I'm pretty sure it was your fanfic i really enjoyed when I first started getting into yyh. I tried searching for for ages...did you happen to finish or continue this fic? I would've loved to know what happened. my email is icekitsune@gmail.com if you want to reply

I like this story. I like that Yusuke is a detective in the ninigen work force. I like this Lin character, but that doesn't explain why she would work for the police. She is human, right? I found the back story on Yusuke kind of weird but it works and you do have to allow for some stretching of canon, but oh well. I find this story extremely intriguing and I like it a lot! I don't like that Yusuke could be beaten up by human thugs if he has all of his powers. If his life, and the lives of those around him, are in danger in a situation like this, couldn't he have used his powers? I am confused as to why the team couldn't find Yusuke. Doesn't Kuwabara know where he lives, or is it that Kuwabara only knows where he works? Couldn't Hiei use the jagan to extract the address from Lin or Yusuke? Doesn't Koenma know where he lives? I also am confused as to who Angel and Jaxxia are, and who are the two people talking in the last chapter about if Yusuke will break or not. I ask you to at least explain who Angel and Jaxxia are in the next chapter, or give us a rough hint. I really did like this story so please don't take what I'm saying as trying to flame you. I just am easily confused and am curious if you have answers for this stuff. I wish you luck with the next chapter and I look forward to reading more soon! I will be looking forward to the next chapter!

These are the two I could spot easily enough:

"I remarked and leaned down to put my helmet on.

Both of us looked turned to see Kurama standing a few feet from our vehicles. Yusuke glanced at Lin."

If you'd like a beta, i'd be more then willing. Maybe someone to help make the story flow a little better. I've been watching this story for years to see if you'd ever update. I'm pleasantly surprised to say the least. Happy writing.[:

Just email me and let me know.

LOVE IT....i already see some differences from the orignal, i can't wait to see what other differences are added

Yes yes yes yes YES YESYESYESYES!!!! I basically had an organism when I saw that you had updated!! I check every once in a while to see if you had updated and you did!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *glomp* Anyway.....I absolutely looove your story. The hints into Yusuke's past and the new twists in the future!!! I also loove how Yusuke is now working for humans as a cop. Your story completely fascinates me and I very much hope that you continue it.

i thought u you forget about this story thank you for the update.

I LOVE THIS!!! I really hope you continue this story!
I like the way you've portrayed yusuke without all his "usual" friends and him having a "dark secret".
Looking forward to the next chappie!!!

Ooooh the suspense!! How evil of you to keep me wondering about what is going to happen next!! Your story has me addicted!! I really really hope you were planning on continuing. Please please please please pleas update!!! I am begging you!!

love this story..this chapter was differnet than in the other one, i can't wait to see what other changes you have made to this story

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was happily surprised to see that there was a new chapter up from when I first read this story. This story is phenomenal. I love the way the story is set up!! Your lure your audience in with enough background history and plot, then BAM!! the real story begins. I am really sad the chapters aren't longer. I saw your were rewriting this story to be in the 3rd person, an was wondering if you were going to finish the story. I would really love to know. There are very few stories I actually get addicted to, but this is one of them. So, I hope to see that you have updated and that you have put your other stories on here because if this story is any indication, then your other stories must be amazing also. Anyway, I am going to go reread this now. Bye-bye.