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for Hiei's Harem - Pt. 3 - Returning

by 66Hiei08

person tigerlilly193
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 7!
how interesting! hm the females are so entertaining!hehe! gREAT CHAPTER LOVE IT!
person tigerlilly193
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 8!
hm another one in heat eh! how interesting! GREAT CHAPTER! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER ITS FANTASTIC!
person tigerlilly193
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 9!
hm i wonder whats wrong with hiei. GREAT CHAPTER! I AM IN LOVE WITH IT!
person tigerlilly193
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 10!
AWE Y DID U END IT THERE! WOW! THIS CHAPTER IS SO AMAZING! I LOVE THIS STORY AND STORY! I TOTALLY CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I'M BEGGING U ON MY HANDS AND KNEES TO MAKE MORE CHAPTERS SOON! (pwetty pwetty please i'm desperate for chapters.) I'LL BE WAITING VERY VERY VERY LONGINGLY! PLEASE DONT KEEP ME IN SUSPENCE LONG!
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know that you're not going to kill him... But I still have to say this:

DAMMIT HIEI!!! YOU BETER NOT DIE!!!!

Okay.. I feel better now. ^^

I loved the updates, and I can't wait for the rest. Oh, I rather liked the idea that you left me on 'Everywhere'. I'm going to use it, I just have to figure out how to write it.
person tigerlilly193
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hm gam finally comes to his senses eh! YAY! ANOTHER UPDATE! I LOVE THIS STORY! I TOTALLY CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT PART OF THE SERIES! ^-^ I CANT WAIT! PLEASE MAKE THE SEQUEL SOON! I'LL BE WAITING!
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It is so nice to see a story with regular updates. And one that I enjoy reading to boot!
Keep up the great work, I look forward to more as always.
And might I make one slight sugestion. Just for those people who might find this story later on. Perhaps you should consider add a 'part one', 'part two' ect. to the titles so that it is a little clearer for newbies.
Legilmyth
person tigerlilly193
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 1!
oo u made the sequel! i'm so happy! poor hiei having to deal with yukina rejecting him! i like the hyena he got some spunk! i like that! i'm glad hiei bought him! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER ITS AMAZING! I CAN MOST DEFINETLY TELL I'LL LOVE THIS STORY!^-^
person tigerlilly193
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 2!
i hope minoru didnt just do something stupid! i have a feeling he already done something hes going to regret! GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT! I THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC!
person tigerlilly193
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 3!
poor minoru! at least he got hiei to take care of him! GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT! ITS FANTASTIC!