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May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great start and I can't wait to see what else happens.Hoping Kewa can protect all of them on the waking
front.Reallly hopeing for a 3 way or maybe a 4 way with Koenma with them.
front.Reallly hopeing for a 3 way or maybe a 4 way with Koenma with them.
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May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, this doesn't have a review, yet? Well, here you go!
Aside from some minor spelling and grammatical errors, this was pretty good. I really, really want to know what's gonna happen next! Ooh, I can't wait! Poor Koenma. And ooh hoo to the possible 3-some! Although, I am wondering what the old lady meant when she said "we" a couple of times...
Well, anyway, great fic, and I totally can't wait for more chapters to pop up! And congrats on your first fic!
Aside from some minor spelling and grammatical errors, this was pretty good. I really, really want to know what's gonna happen next! Ooh, I can't wait! Poor Koenma. And ooh hoo to the possible 3-some! Although, I am wondering what the old lady meant when she said "we" a couple of times...
Well, anyway, great fic, and I totally can't wait for more chapters to pop up! And congrats on your first fic!