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for Hiei's Harem - Pt. 1 - Establishment

by 66Hiei08

person tigerlilly193
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
CHAP 20!
hehe staci is on her period! GREAT CHAPTER! I'M GLAD U KEEP UPDATING! THATS WHAT I LOVE ABOUT U! U UPDATING UR STORIES! U ARE SUCH A GREAT WRITER AND I LOVE UR STORIES!^^
person tigerlilly193
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 21!
poor trinka! i hope hiei will be able to help her! GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT! FANTASTIC! god i love this story!
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy that I can inspire you to make such a good chapter as that^_^ Poor Staci though, menstruation pains and nothing to dull the pain. I'd die if that were me>.<
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am happy.....I got 3 in one day! Love the cliffy with the girls bad memories. Hope you are feeling better also.
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow..... more drama for hiei!! haha!


anyways great job!

laters!

miko ~_^
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, Hiei is *so* cute when he's all protective and helpful^_^ Gamaru is a pain in the neck though, he really needs to learn his place! I'm kind of confused, earlier Hiei was told that if he didn't mark the women they would die. Gamaru and the other boys are also marked, doesn't that mean that they will die to if Hiei doesn't mark them? Then why did Sarista said that if Gamaru survives a possible confrontation with Hiei she'd send him away? Wouldn't Gamaru just die?
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You don't have to hurry on my account. I know how it feels to have something to do and not feel like doing it. I'll gladly wait for you because this story is too good to drop.
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it is a small wonder that i haven't died of blood loss, yet.

this story is a blood dripper indeed!!!


laters!!
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story. Are you going to do the fast update thing on this one like the other stories? I really like reading more than one chapter a day.
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i tried everything to ignore this....thinking that this wasn't good enough to keep my mind happy............

i was proven wrong.

this fic has a unique way of grabing a person.

great work of art!

laters! ~_^

miko