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by thothmoon

schedule November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was cute. I really enjoyed it a lot.
person tcfang
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! Amuzing as you intended! I particularly thought the ending was very lovely!
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, did you HAVE to end it there? XD That was awesome though. I love ticklish-ness in fanfics, it's so funny!
person 66Hiei08
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I did find this piece amusing. The dialog sometimes was choppy and confusing (ie: not exactly understanding what was being implied. Like about Hiei's leg) so it could have been a bit more descriptive, but overall I enjoyed it.