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December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It's wonderful
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far. Your take on Yomi and Kurama's relationship is interesting. I look forward to updates.
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Still riveting. You have Yomi and Kurama's balance that is their relationship portrayed nicely. I liked how Yomi is more powerful now, so powerful that Kurama needed to rest before walking home. Also, the line of him not being able to hate Yomi at the end tugged at my heart. Kurama is so confused...and him climbing into bed with Yomi? Beautiful.
This story deserves more reviews than it's getting. I'm going to go spread the word.
This story deserves more reviews than it's getting. I'm going to go spread the word.
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April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so rich. It has depth, I love it. Kurama is portrayed wonderfully and that line about the scar on his abdomen was awesome. It's amazing how Yusuke always gets to Kurama one way or another.
And those last few paragraphs about Yomi being with Kurama feeling like revenge were amazing.
And those last few paragraphs about Yomi being with Kurama feeling like revenge were amazing.
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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is very good! i'm glad someone is finally posting a story worth my time. please continue.
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I like the style of your writing and the way you handled Kurama's character. You manage to keep him in character while making him so deliciously...delicious. XD I loved his interaction with Yusuke and Yomi. Also, you delved so beautifully into his mind. Great job on this! (Assuming it's a one-shot. If it is to be chaptered, update soon!)
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March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far!! It's nice to see a Kurama/Yomi story that isn't negative or depict Yomi being a complete bastard. At the end of the anime Yomi and Kurama come to a respectful friendship and I actually like this shipping.
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. You keep everyone in-character so well, and that's hard with all the layers between Kurama and Yomi. Yusuke was being annoying anf cute at the same time, and Kurama really did send him packing! I'd love to see more of this, Yomi doesn't get enough attention in fanfic and you're doing a wonderful job at this!