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for Kurama's mistake

by xkuramaxhieix

person tk04
schedule February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just checking to see if you planning to come and finish the story. It been a life time (to me it is) since you came back make some update to the story. I want to know how the story going to end. It driving me crazy not know what going to happen next.
person tk04
schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
To be honest I don't like this stoty but somehow i can't seen to stop reading. There alot interesting plot in the stoty. Anyways, please continue. I want to know what happen next. I want more tears, torture, understanding, and love between them.
person Promise
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY its me Promise again this story has also made my top 5 list lol i just loooooooovvvvveeee kuramaXhiei they so cute and oh yea youko's my baby but yea once again yea i kno its like been some LONG MONTHS but hey just showing my appriation in writing these stories and dissapoint in not finishing them ugh but u kno hey if u still remember ur account on adultfanfiction then hit me up lol :)
person Hi
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Update Update. Read it in one go. I like it a lot. :)
person ruthie balboa
schedule April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story. I like it, although it does make Youko seem like an ass but I think that's how he's supposed to be. I really want to know what happens next! Please update soon!
schedule January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh boy... sounds like Youko is making more problems.. it's already not balanced between them >>
good story
person Lauren
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
person Anon
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please don't be mad or discourage because of this but, the latest chapter is choppy and saying the previous chapter was all a dream is a little bit of a copout. I really did love this story when it first started and want to see it to the end but I think the plot needs some work and rewriting the last few chapters.

I hope this isn't too harsh.
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank goodness!!! I was REALLY scared there!! i can't wait to see what the fox has cooked up!!!
person lauren
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story so far! I cant wait for you to update!