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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Ican't wait for you to update.
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that last chapter seemed to kind go serval ways at once. Still, the buliding of plot can do that. I can't wait for the next update.
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*squeals*
They're kissing!! lol. and i wonder what kurama really wants from Yusuke. hehehe
i can't wait until you get in more, but wait i will. good luck!!!
They're kissing!! lol. and i wonder what kurama really wants from Yusuke. hehehe
i can't wait until you get in more, but wait i will. good luck!!!
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok wow you can sure write. Am I to take it that this will be a dom. Kurama ? Please up date as soon as you can for I will be checking a lot
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooo, I like this. Poor Yusuke; I just want to give him a hug. -cheers Kurama on-
I really like your writing. ^^ Looking forward to reading what happens next!
I really like your writing. ^^ Looking forward to reading what happens next!
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you updated pretty quickly. While I'm estatic at your attention to this fic, I'm not exactly where you're going with this. The first chapter had me interested though. It's a little disconcerting that Atsuko is still having those parties, but I guess it just fit into the story line. What IS the story line?? O_o I really want to know about this expression that was on Kurama's face. And why did he break into and steal Yusuke's belongings instead of just picking them up with the boy on the way out of town? That seems... strange.
Hn. I'll read this next chapter and see what's up.
Hn. I'll read this next chapter and see what's up.
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i just felt a bit confused, but i think i got the gist of it alright. can't wait for another chapter!
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked the second chapter. The only complaint I had was that it could have been more linear, I had to stop and think about where this was going, but once I read the chapter a second time it made more sense. Hiei and Kurama's relationship pertaining to Hiei and Mukuro's relationship is interesting and, actually, it makes sense. Hiei wouldn't want to hurt Mukuro the first time, so he would need to train with someone he trusts: Kurama.
(Unlike most Hiei/Kurama fans, I adore Hiei/Mukuro. Although one day I'd love to see a Hiei/Kurama lemon from you, you do Yusuke/Kurama so much justice I'm sure you'd write a beatiful Hiei/Kurama lemon (and whenever you write H/K they're always so in-character).)
Poor Yusuke, so confused and scarred. *giggles* I can't wait for more of this.
(Unlike most Hiei/Kurama fans, I adore Hiei/Mukuro. Although one day I'd love to see a Hiei/Kurama lemon from you, you do Yusuke/Kurama so much justice I'm sure you'd write a beatiful Hiei/Kurama lemon (and whenever you write H/K they're always so in-character).)
Poor Yusuke, so confused and scarred. *giggles* I can't wait for more of this.
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is lovely. You really write some raw Kurama/Yusuke and never skimp on Kurama's demon nature, which is always nice. I laughed a lot when that guy put his hand on Kurama's ass at the party - I bet he'll never do that again! And you really write Yusuke's place well, I could feel the desolation of his apartment.
Can't wait for the next installment. And the title is awesome. So fitting.
Can't wait for the next installment. And the title is awesome. So fitting.
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great. I cannot wait for the next chapter so please update soon!