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June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fanfic. It has several good points that people tend to not include in fanfics concerning Kurama or Yusuke. 1. Kurama is a crafty, smart, and albeit sometimes devious fox. 2. Kurama is not a fluffly little innocent fox, nor is he helpless or weak. 3. Yusuke is not a damned pansy either. He can be rude, crude, and sometimes mean but has a good heart. I have read too many fanfics where Kurama or Yusuke are completely helpless and vulnerable and it takes an over-heroic looking Hiei or Kuwabara to save either of them. Finfics like that sometimes bore me if they are not set in an alternative universe or something like that. I have to thank you for a fanfic that at least preserves some of their original characteristics. I usually like Hiei Kurama stories because those stories are more often closer to the series when it comes to the characters themselves, but this Yusuke Kurama fanfic is good! I really like it and hope you write more! (P.S. I like it when Kurama is a scheming fox, and you captured that perfectly, so I give you some imaginary cookies for doing that!)
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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I always love your Kurama/Yusuke lemons, they have this richiness to them. Especially the line about Yusuke coming apart in Kurama's arms. Heh. I wonder what kind of "bonding" Kurama and his little brother used to do...you leave a lot to the imagination with your words. And Shiori is funny and amazing - only she could manipulate Kurama just as he manipulates others.
Can't wait for more, I'm really enjoying this story!
Can't wait for more, I'm really enjoying this story!
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June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
As small as the cursor bar already is, I always wish it was smaller because that would mean that i had more to read. It is kind of hard for me to find a YuYu Hakusho I actually enjoy reading because I am picky, but let me tell you that yours is beyond enjoyable. It is riveting, amazing, phenomenal, brilliant, captivating, and any other word that means way way WAY above average or expectations. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooo i am sooo excited you updated. i love this story and where it's going. can't wait for more
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April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Several mindmelting orgasms later, to Yusuke’s irritation by the time Kurama left, he still hadn’t figured out how to say ‘No’.
can you move that up a couple of space when you have time. only because i didn't know that was part of it.
can you move that up a couple of space when you have time. only because i didn't know that was part of it.
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April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*screams with joy* A NEW CHAPTER! *dances and claps* I was bowled over when I saw you'd posted the fourth part! I was so worried it might not be continued (despite the "of 7" part in every chapter heading), but now my faith is renewed. I love predatory, possessive Kurama paired with this sorta vulnerable, bewildered Yusuke. Plus, ya know, the sex is HOT. XDXDXD And I believe intracrural is a highly underestimated and underused form of sex in fanfic, so thanks for that! Most writers just go straight for the butt, hahah. I also appreciate the long chapters. I realize that may be a large part of what takes so long between each installment. I can only say the wait was well worth it. Keep up the amazing work, okay? Best regards.
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April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD!!!!!! I almost cried when I didn't see that there was another chapter!! It is soo hard to find good Yusuke/Kurama stories and let me tell you, your's is gooood!!! Can't wait for the next update!!
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April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm super excited to see another chapter in your wonderful fic!! There may have been some undignified squealing on my end...but anyway, great chapter. I loved how Yusuke's eyes were finally opened to Kurama's advances in this chapter. Your portrayal of Kurama's human mother is the best I've read, especially how well she knows him. Can't wait for more.
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April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Exciting title - I really loved the first bit with Yuusuke in his apartment. His thoughts were vintage Urameshi speak, and it was sad without him acting victimized (he was alone, but he planned to drink and made an effort, and the present seemed pretty awesome) so it was touching, but not maudlin. It was fun and I enjoyed his voice (It was, like, an idiot proof plan!)
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April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"You're in my spot." Yay for bratty Hiei, and conciliatory Kurama, and their demonic hideaway.