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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. Your story was excellent and made me smile, especially your word usage. There were a few grammatical errors but it was good and you kept everyone in character. The baby at the end? Icing on an already fabulous cake.
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December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wai~ the story flow is great! and I look into your profile to read more your writing..gasp! what I found!! you're the writer of "as we lay" I absolutely love that story. As we lay solidified my interest in kurama x yusuke pairing (with seme kurama) Unfortunately this airing is lacking. you pictured kurama and yusuke maturity beautifully. but still you drew to much parallel between this story 1) the war between kurama and keiko 2) sensuality of kurama and yusuke 3) yusuke insecurities issue. but..but..but I love all this , so I don't mind it been repeated. Hopefully you wrote more lengthy plot kurama x yusuke series
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was an incredible story that needs more reviews because honestly? That was a smoking hot lemon. I haven't read something that different and wicked in a long time. And the plot of adorable and all kinds of Yusuke/Kurama goodness. I really like your writing, it has a unique flow.
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September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lls....who gives there parthner a baby for christmas...that ending was way to funny. im glad that keiko found happpiness.
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August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter! I thought it was good. I hope you write more stories. I enjoy reading your stories over and over again!
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August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just read all five chapters. Really hot. Your Yusuke is dead on. Loved it.
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August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yum...i was so waiting for that.
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August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes another chapter just to hold me over until the next update. Also i want to know what happen to Puu because in As We Lay and I Care For You he was never brought up.
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July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just GREAT!!! I love your stories ("As We Lay" is still one of my favorites, though I'm really liking this one too). I hope to see the 5th chapter as soon as you're done. I absolutely love this pairing XDXDXD Wonderful work! (^-^)
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June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have read this story multiple times and this story still manages to completely capture my attention. I am completely riveted by this story. I am bouncing on the balls of my feet in anticipation of what will happen next. Oh! I noticed that in one of your AN's, you said that you didn't have a beta. Well if you are looking for one, I would be humbled and honored if you would consider me. Not that I actually think you need a beta, but in case you wanted one - I am here, willing and waiting. Anyway, absolutely amazing!! Your story.