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for Pain’s Redemption

by ss_dragon_lady

person kerbear
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well,great story as always!I can't wait for the next installment to this as well,you left way to many loop
holes in this one.
a)training Shiori's son
b)Yusuke coming back
c)adding new one such as Toushi's sister
d whats going on with Kurama/Hiei's other kids
I know theres more but can't think of them right now.Your a great writter and I look forward to lots more.
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWW! how cute!! More please!! I loe this arc!! You are a genius!!
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, another happy ending. I can't wait to see what you have in mind for the missing sister.
person lijana
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice. It is good to finally see Toushi and Kaihei together, I am glad that Kaihei was seme.

I look forward tot he next chapter.
person MewMew2
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bravo. An interesting twist to a much anticipated scene. Thank you for continuing to update this story after all this time.
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and hot sex. The perfect combination.
person kimmy8503
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was very hot an very beautiful. an i cant wait for more.
person kerbear
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Though maybe it was needed between them,I wonder how Kaihei would feel knowing Toushi only sees him as
obedient.And they did it out in the open,mark one for Toushi on that.I can't wait to see what else he gets him
to do.
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thats a horribly mean ending to a chapter.
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I love it!! But what happened to yusuke and gang and what about the dragon ball characters? More please!!!!