rate_review Reviews

A wonderful story and beautifully written. The only thing I will tell you is that you became repetitive in two lines when you said, "Graves are foolish human things, Ningen things". Not to be pestering, but Human and Ningen are the same thing, so you said, "Graves are foolish human things, human things." It threw me off a little bit. Aside from that, it was beautiful and sad. Keep up the lovely writing.

So sad. I can't believe how sad. Why would Hiei kill himself? Did he think that Kurama would never want him or something?

That is very sad and touching. It's just the right length, with just the right amount of detail, to keep a reader's attention and still make them wonder about the intricacies. Very nicely done, and very enjoyable reading.