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for MISSING YOU

by ShioriFoxiesMom

person Hemamal
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yusuke is married to Yukina and Kuwa is married to Keiko?? That is sooo weird! And Kurama is married with a baby on the way? I feel so bad for Hiei!

Update soon!!!! I can't wait!
person Sandra
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yet again, another hit! Please update soon, I can't wait to read more.
person Animediva
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS FIC! Don't stop! You can't them up now! Well,technically you can since you're the author, but I have to see how they get back together. Why did he leave the tear gem behind?
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooooh, this looks like a great start! I can't wait to see where you go with this. The lemon was all kinds of hot, with just enough repressed feeling and hidden innocence to really liven it up. It's the bittersweet angle that gets me every time, and you hit it right on the head. I'm already hoping for a happy ending and waiting (im)patiently to see how you get us from here to there!!
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
god talk about a heart breaking ending. But im happy 2 c that u got right back into writing so fast ^.^ I have to say I was really worried there 4 a bit when u said u were out of ideas 4 stories :/ but im glad 2 c it wasnt true XD... Im kinda wondering about that mark that was left on hiei. Was it a real mating mark at like a lower level or was it just a common hicky lol? Oh well im sure ull tell us later. So pretty pretty please update soon (insert big fox kit eyes here)!!!!!!
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Goofy Kurama...you're not supposed to leave him!!!!!
person fluffybunnies
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is a an enticing start, i can't wait to see how this continues
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That lemon was hot. Very hot. *fans self* Now why would Kurama want to leave that? Stupid fox. Also: Yomi is win.