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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great, as always, but I want Kurama and Hiei to REALLY be together, without Maya.
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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GAAAAHHHH!!!! I loved it, but I feel so... guilty about that! You know I want Hiei and Kurama to be together. It's my OTP. Heck, I can find irrefutable proof that Hiei and Kurama belong together in anything! But I feel so awkward wanting them to be with each other with the whole Maya situation. Ack!!!! You've put them (and us readers) in such as sticky place! I NEED MORE!!!!!!
I love your Shiori. She's such a great woman, accepting Maya into the family regardless of her opinions on her son's marriage, helping out when Maya needed a hand, and now saying what she did to Kurama in the hospital. She's simply perfect. I also love how you had Kurama so close to snapping when he spoke to his mom and how snappy his responses were. Stretched fox is a wonderful thing. Angsty stretched fox is even better, and you're quickly capturing that, too. I can't wait to see how this plays out. I have little theories in my mind of ways this could be made to work, but alas, I just ahve to wait for your next update.
PS-by the way, your story likes to haunt me. I think about it at the most inconvenient times (work, trying to sleep, trying to concentrate on some real life things). Please consider that a compliment; not many stories can wriggled into my mind quite like that, and your certainly has.
I love your Shiori. She's such a great woman, accepting Maya into the family regardless of her opinions on her son's marriage, helping out when Maya needed a hand, and now saying what she did to Kurama in the hospital. She's simply perfect. I also love how you had Kurama so close to snapping when he spoke to his mom and how snappy his responses were. Stretched fox is a wonderful thing. Angsty stretched fox is even better, and you're quickly capturing that, too. I can't wait to see how this plays out. I have little theories in my mind of ways this could be made to work, but alas, I just ahve to wait for your next update.
PS-by the way, your story likes to haunt me. I think about it at the most inconvenient times (work, trying to sleep, trying to concentrate on some real life things). Please consider that a compliment; not many stories can wriggled into my mind quite like that, and your certainly has.
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok..makes me wonder if Maya got herself pregnant with another male's child. However, how did Kurama get involved? More!!!!
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, did Hiei hear that? I can't wait to find out.
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another interesting story, I have nothing original to say so I'll say the usual keep up the good work and I can't wait until you update!
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, could it be that Kurama isn't the father of Maya's baby? Some many ideas are running through my mind. You're so awesome when it comes to tension
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting plot. A very interesting plot. I feel so badly for Hiei. And the tattoo on Kurama's arm is beyond hot (I mean, it's sentimental too but it's also hot.) I have a pic of Kurama with that dragon tattoo all over his body and I swoon everytime I look at it.
Poor Maya too, I have a feeling she's going to get the short end of the stick when this story is over.
Poor Maya too, I have a feeling she's going to get the short end of the stick when this story is over.
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WARNING - Spoilers in this review - couldn't help it.
oooh, you sneaky author, you! Very sly, slipping in a wife like that. I was expecting that companion to be male. You've shown me just how closed minded I can be when it comes to the guys. But I also was stuck pondering that relationship all day. The part that stuck in my mind the most was Kurama and Maya dressing his wounds. My gut reaction was to wonder how anyone dares to touch Kurama (other than Hiei, of course). But then again, she's his wife. They share their lives and bed and bodies and he has made a human life for himself with her. I was thinking about what they share and what he has not shared with her (the whole demon thing) and I felt kind of sad for her. I hope she does not end up heartbroken in the end.
Strangely enough, I envision the Kurama in your story differently than in most others. I usually picture him as very thin, like a young man who has not "filled out" yet - like he looks in the series. When I envision them dressing his wounds, he's more filled out, like a mature adult human would be. Of course he's still fit and strong, just more mature than I usually picture him. I'm not sure what about your story gave me a different mental picture, but the whole point of telling you that was to let you know you have inspired a different visual picture, and I enjoy your story and picturing the scenes in my mind.
oooh, you sneaky author, you! Very sly, slipping in a wife like that. I was expecting that companion to be male. You've shown me just how closed minded I can be when it comes to the guys. But I also was stuck pondering that relationship all day. The part that stuck in my mind the most was Kurama and Maya dressing his wounds. My gut reaction was to wonder how anyone dares to touch Kurama (other than Hiei, of course). But then again, she's his wife. They share their lives and bed and bodies and he has made a human life for himself with her. I was thinking about what they share and what he has not shared with her (the whole demon thing) and I felt kind of sad for her. I hope she does not end up heartbroken in the end.
Strangely enough, I envision the Kurama in your story differently than in most others. I usually picture him as very thin, like a young man who has not "filled out" yet - like he looks in the series. When I envision them dressing his wounds, he's more filled out, like a mature adult human would be. Of course he's still fit and strong, just more mature than I usually picture him. I'm not sure what about your story gave me a different mental picture, but the whole point of telling you that was to let you know you have inspired a different visual picture, and I enjoy your story and picturing the scenes in my mind.
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love all of your stories!! It drives me crazy when you right new ones because I read the next chapter and have to wait. Its like reading a really good book and you keep having to put it down. Keep up the wonderful work.
The 2nd chapter was interesting I wasnt expecting that to say the least! I hope the next chapter comes soon!
The 2nd chapter was interesting I wasnt expecting that to say the least! I hope the next chapter comes soon!
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If you've ever read any of my stories, you'll know that I love long, involved stories.. as long as they're updated frequently, lol. But no pressure.