rate_review Reviews

Good to hear they have happen ending. I kind hoping it didn't end. Oh well thank you.

All that I can say is Oh My God! The showers of praise that I rain upon you and your literary genius are biblical in proportion. I never read YuYu Hakusho fan fiction before, yours is the first and now I am afraid that I cant read anyone else’s. I get one set paring in my mind and then I see any others as some sick form of adultery. Well Hiei and Kurama are it! I appreciate your commitment to finishing your stories. I have noticed that many of the better writers start work then don’t finish. Thank you for being an exception to that rule. Also, I love that you referenced Kelis’ song in one of your works. It is a favorite of mine.
Please keep writing and I promise I will keep reading!!!!

OMG! omg omg i LOVE this story!!!! it was so GOOD!!!

Well, a year has past since I have read your work and this was a beautiful story to come back to! I have never once been dissappointed with your writing and I am so thankful that you choose to share your talent with others. Thank you so much for another wonderful story.

loved it nuff said

I can honestly say this is one story I hated to see end. Seriously. It was very well done.

I've always been a fan of your works, but there was something about this recent chapter that irked me. ):

"The air began to crackle as smoke began to swirl around Kurama. All six women shivered when a deadly cold voice came through the smoke. “I warned you to release my lover! Now feel the power of the master of plant manipulation!” "

This part here, is kind of like a line from those cheesy movies that makes your skin crawl because you know it's cheesy. Especially the last sentence. I think, that one, was the worst out of the mini paragraph.

"As the smoke dissipated revealing the legendary Youko, his energy flared with a loud bang. The nymphs screamed when the ground beneath them shook as every one of their plants exploded. Before their screams died, Kurama’s plants had reclaimed the temple grounds."

This needs a bit more detail because shortening it like this makes it sound really......well,....lame.

"In one swift movement, Kurama drew his rose whip and killed the leader and the other nymph holding Hiei. As Kurama rushed to him, Yusuke fired his spirit gun. With one swing of his sword, Kuwabara struck down a fourth nymph. From Kurama’s arms, Hiei watched in amazement as Yukina sent shards of ice at a fifth nymph, slicing her to pieces."

This one just needs a lot more detail. Or it should be made to be part of a new chapter itself because then you can add more detail. I really think it just needs more detail.

I am always so happy to see a new chapter from you, thank you for the great love stories you write between these two.

What type of papers? What PLAN??????

All i want to know is when will Kurama ditch the brod?
Sounds like it might be soon ^^

And what is wrong with Hiei?? Pleace Tell Us!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! you can't leave us there!!!!!!! please!!!! more!!!!!!!!!!!!