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by Villain

person tk04
schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Don't get me wrong. The story is hot. Some how i find it really cute. Hahaha
person Wow
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
God damn. All I have to say is god fucking damn. Fanfics never ever turn me on. This one had my heart racing and everything. So fucking hot, especially the fingers in Kurama's mouth. This is exactly how I imagine they'd fuck.
I'm going to have to take this one to bed.
Absolutely fantastic job.
person Ur mom
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely the best Hiei/Kurama i've ever read I swear to god!
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Villain...

I think I love you...marry me?

Tee hee, seriously though, A-M-A-Z-I-N-G job!!
person 12344321
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol. I liked it! Good job!
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lack of plot was prefect...
And that's pretty much all I can muster-up to say except for... Wow.
person PeepingIni
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
zomgod you're back! just checking out the yu yu fanfiction section (and isn't it dead now?!!) and found this gem... couldn't believe it. I thought all the good writers had given up on YYH! Be a rebel and keep on writing... yeah...
I was there! I was in that room!
made my day! thanks a million.
person NyteKit
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God. This was just too fucking hot for words. I'm going to have to reread this. Multiple times. Just to be coherent after a read. This was too amazing. I always knew you were great but this definitely surpassed your other lemons that I've read. Wonderful, amazing, sexy-as-hell job!
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap! *nose bleed* I have to go clean up now. That was amazing.
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHGTDIAGIDGIYAGTDIYGAIGS Oh god, I moved this weekend in 10 inches of snow and I only got to this now. Let me tell you, when I finished reading this I was a lovely shade of red and I only knew that because my man was staring at me and uttering: WHAT DID YOU JUST READ? Very little fanfic out there gets my flustered when I'm done reading and this hit the mark.

THIS. This is what I think about when those two go at it. I mean, they're demons, they're not fluffy bunnies, let's see that in bed!

The dirty talk broke my mind, especially whenever Hiei spoke. The fingers in Kurama's mouth, the splayed red hair, the Jagan-infused thrusting...you really know how to write them, don'tcha? The sex was rough, hot and dirty and wonderful. I know I'm going to read this about 100 times...probably more. Definitely more. A thousand thanks for this. A million thanks!

LOVE FOR YOU.