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November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely demand more of this. Absolutely. Like... I'm really, really hooked on this story. I really enjoy AU stories that keep to good characterizations, and... I want more. Please? Soon? I'll keep an eye out for it.
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February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just dropping in to let you know that this is THE high school AUs of high school AUs. I read it all over again and I love every second of it.
And Kuronue singing through Yomi's hangover with the assistance of Shura was pure gold.
And Kuronue singing through Yomi's hangover with the assistance of Shura was pure gold.
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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... I wonder how Shuichi will handle Kurasu... It appears Yoko has no problems with him but Shuichi might. Especially since no one has warned him yet.
I like how you've managed to get everyone in the story, and in a way similar to canon... You know Yomi being blind and having a kid, Mokuro being older and with scars...
hope you'll continue this!
I like how you've managed to get everyone in the story, and in a way similar to canon... You know Yomi being blind and having a kid, Mokuro being older and with scars...
hope you'll continue this!
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
UNF for the Karasu/Kurama scene. Really. Karasu is seriously crazy in this, like crazay in a different way than he usually is, like literate crazy, and I like it.
Hiei sleeping on Mukuro's porch while she was out getting laid with Shizuru is GOLD, PURE GOLD. Thank you for nodding at a hot YYH yuri pairing. And wow, Mukuro gets around.
The whole scene at the pizza place had me in stitches. And I had OCD so I feel for Kuro when Youko fucks with him about wiping down the table.
Hiei sleeping on Mukuro's porch while she was out getting laid with Shizuru is GOLD, PURE GOLD. Thank you for nodding at a hot YYH yuri pairing. And wow, Mukuro gets around.
The whole scene at the pizza place had me in stitches. And I had OCD so I feel for Kuro when Youko fucks with him about wiping down the table.
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Considering the fact that I grew up in the glam rock era, I'm enjoying the titles of the chapters. Heh. And you know I'm loving this because I have a weakness for high school AUs. Hiei has such a lovely mouth on his, doesn't he? And the separate Shuuichi/Youko? Loving that too. I've been saying "Bitch, make me a sandwich." for a few days now, that end scene was pretty hot.
You've got everyone in there, it's amazing. And Karasu putting on a de Sade play? WIN. (will we have some Shuuichi/Karasu action in this? Maybe? If I'm nice?)
You've got everyone in there, it's amazing. And Karasu putting on a de Sade play? WIN. (will we have some Shuuichi/Karasu action in this? Maybe? If I'm nice?)
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December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fanfiction makes me laugh(in good ways)! xD Ehe. I love fics where Suuichi and Youko are portrayed as different people, so bravo on that~! Youko's so much fun. And you've got Hiei down pat, too! 'He looks like a bitch.' xD Wtf, poor Suuichi(not that the description isn't hilarious)~! Also, Yukina and her hanging out with the 'Koorime cousins'. x3 Exceptional maneuvering, there. We get to see Hiei tell the family that rejected him('cept Yukina, of course) to fuck off(I know all the 100,000,000,000,000,000,000+ Hiei fans are relishing that, too)! xDD
I like that you've got Kuronue in here, too--we never see much of him in fics, 'cause of the dead thing, and it's fun to see how people experiment with his personality('cause we don't ever actually see him in 'present-time', even in the movie). The Yomi/Youko scene was good, too. Nicely done, considering Yomi's blind. :3 I'll be awaiting the next chapter~! ^^
I like that you've got Kuronue in here, too--we never see much of him in fics, 'cause of the dead thing, and it's fun to see how people experiment with his personality('cause we don't ever actually see him in 'present-time', even in the movie). The Yomi/Youko scene was good, too. Nicely done, considering Yomi's blind. :3 I'll be awaiting the next chapter~! ^^
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December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great AU fic! I love all the humor you put into it. Each character has his own defined brand of sarcasm that fits so well. You have a near perfect characterization of the characters we know and have created very believable lives for the ones we don't! But it's really the humor that gets me! I just love it!
The story's starting off well, too. I'm definitely interested in where you're going with it. And I already know you're a great writer so I'm going to continue reading. The warnings have me hopeful, especially with the promise of Karasu. Oh, also, the names you came up with were creative. It fits each character and its obvious you actually thought it through. So, great job and update soon!
One typo I noticed:
"while he kept on hand on"
You forgot the 'e' in 'one'
The story's starting off well, too. I'm definitely interested in where you're going with it. And I already know you're a great writer so I'm going to continue reading. The warnings have me hopeful, especially with the promise of Karasu. Oh, also, the names you came up with were creative. It fits each character and its obvious you actually thought it through. So, great job and update soon!
One typo I noticed:
"while he kept on hand on"
You forgot the 'e' in 'one'