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for Yusuke's Revenge

by sefiru

person Katonie
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
BOdy parts?!?!?! Hahahaha, OMG that's hilarious! Please update again soon, oh! and here's some cookies for insentive to update.
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Katonie
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mukuro is so whipped, at least where Yukina is concerned.
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahaha! yes! XD I'd love for my house to do that....of course...then i might be disturbed if i see boobs or something...other...sprouting up. ^^; I almost feel sorry for those soldiers. X'D I love those girls. heheh
person Syamak
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hehehe I must say that I like your Yukina. So often she has such a small part or is really flat but you do a good job making her believable; and fun. ^^
person Zeenath
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! ^-^ New chappie! ^-^ I love the way Mukuro is gnashing at everything and doesn't even realise that the one being seduced and traped is HER! ^-^
Keep up the good work ^-^
See ya ^-^
person Doodle_Penguin
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOHHHHH!!!!!! A sequal! YAY!!! I cant wait for the next chapter!
person Zeenath
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! ^-^ New chappie! ^-^ Well this was surtenly diffrent and pretty HOT! Nice play on all of kuramas forms I gotta say. It wasn't vulgar and was as nicely written as always. ^-^
Keep up the good work ^-^
See ya! ^-^
P.S. thanks for the chocolate covered asprin... they should make some.
person tigerlilly193
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hm. very interesting! this was a great chapter! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER AND STORY! CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS SOON DANMIT! ILL BE WAITING!
person kitkit
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow hot foxy lemon, never thought i would read something like that.
i'm not to sure if i should be ashamed of the fact that i loved it.
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
even though u went there god damn was it hot. go you!