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for Yusuke's Revenge

by sefiru

schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooo, yum. XD I would so use magical bindings like that too. heheheh, the fun would never stop! boy, is Koenma in for it. ^^

A new spirit detective? o.o oh my. I wonder how all that is going to go over.
person lijana
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes. This is as hot as ever! Thanks.

Do some ravishing Yusuke, oh and I am curious about Kurama's plans for Koenma's 'treasures' LOL

The previous chapter had me thinking that Mukuro better watch out or she wont be the one wearing the skirt in that relationship LOL ^___________^
person Meli Christophorous
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what're they gonna do? T.P. koenma's office? have sex on his desk? or just turn his life into the very epitome of hell? heh. can't wait. as for that little binding collar....god, i want one. oh, the fun to be had.... and something about a new detective? holy crap, i hope it's someone who either puts koenma through the ringer, who yusuke scares the absolute hell out of, or who wants to join the happy threesome....or a girl...that makes koenma miserable. can't wait...literally. ja ne. Meli-chan.
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was such an interesting take on the tear gems. I really wish we could hear more about that. Also, amazing chapter as always.
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I find it kind of amusing that the two security words I have to type in to leave this review are "exploded" and "served". Very appropriate for this chapter.

Anyway, I'll take two Hieis with collar please (because I'll probably break one). That was hot. And yes to Kurama wearing nothing but the earring. I guess I'll go clean up now.
person kitkit
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow wonderful
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
They are so cute!! I love it!! More please!!
person Meli Christophorous
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
holy crap, there's a *penis* on the wall?! seriously?! what an awesome as hell castle/fortress-thing! and i got to admit, i'd hate to see what mukuro's pissed off imagination could conjure as well. well, i'd like to *see*...from a safe distance...with popcorn and a camcorder handy...yeah. as for yukina, i get the feeling she knows just what she's doing to the poor woman...of course she is hiei's sister. who knows what kinds of wicked thoughts lurk in that cheerful little brain of hers... *sing-song* i'll bet you do! ja ne. Meli-chan.
person 66Hiei08
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not crazy about Yuri, but I'm still reading this for all the other stuff. :o)
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
MORE ELABORATION ON THAT PART!!!!!(male organ?!?!?!) hahahahaah