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for Yusuke's Revenge

by sefiru

person Meli Christophorous
schedule April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
really can't wait for the desk and dear god what have you done to hiei? is he just that horny? cause that's awesome! and enma-daioh...wow. didn't see that coming...nice. and while it is truly obvious you dislike koenma...do you dislik poor kuwa as well? poor guy stood a snowball's chance in hell against yusuke... now...lets throw the smexy hiyoukai over some furniture!!! ja ne. Meli-chan.
person Zeenath
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol ^-^ They stole his underpants!!!!!!!!!!! and O.O Yusuke's growing up!? hmmmmm bit of a lemon coming up? ^-^
Keep up the good work ^-^
See ya ^-^
person Raholea
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* I actually have time to review properly tonight!!!! And considering it's only... 9:12 PM Alaska time, Friday, you're well withing the safe zone. lol. I love forwar to updates from you whenever possible.

now back to this story, which i drool every chapter there is some sort of steamy or horny demon male running around.... I totally loved nervous Hiei!! So nervous, so aroused, then so disappointed with having to wait!! his smut better be worth it!
Not to mention that Kurama- sexy did just as beautifully as the little ice brat. *chuckles* i love the sexy men, and while i'm still mulling over the whole chics moment, you haven't turned me off it yet! good luck and keep going!!!
person Katonie
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, Hiei is so easily turned on ^_^ And Kuwabara was kinda..disappointing...*shrug* oh well, I can't wait for the next chapter! Update again soon please ^.^

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Katonie
person kit-kit
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice me like....yukina is easily pleased
person Neko-chan
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love you writing Goddess! This Story and the first one just get better and better every time I read them! I especially loved the ice cream scene as it wasn't there the last time I read this fanfiction. I look forward to your writer's block ending soon! ( Hopefully ) keep up the awesome-ness!
Neko-Chan~

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person Meli Christophorous
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wait, wait, wait...furuba kyo? uh...no comment. uber points on the total mukuro/yukina cuteness. i have to admit i am really warming up to the woman...as for koenma...even if he is a hottie in grown-up form, he is quickly losing all appeal. spanked?! big baby...*grin* can't wait for more...especially the desk you promised...ja ne. Meli-chan.
person Katonie
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Kuwabara vs Uremeshi (sp?) That sounds hilarious! But I have a feeling Yusuke isn't going to be losing...

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie
person Zeenath
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice ^-^ well I can tell you that even with writers block you still manage to catch your readers attention.
*smirk* can't wait to know what Yusuke and the other two did to Koenma's home. ^-^
Keep up the good work ^-^
^-^ see ya ^-^
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yukina has everyone sooo wrapped around her little finger. I hope Kyo does follow her home just to see Hiei freak. :D