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for Yusuke's Revenge

by sefiru

person kerbear
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yummy a chocolate covered Hiei.Mukuro is going to have a heck of a time corting with those 3
around.Nice chapter,the bandits are being ignored by Yusuke for now ,why? plus are they going to be
a problem for Mukuro as well?Still seems like lots of fun is coming I can't wait.
Nice job
person Meli Christophorous
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* yeah, i agree with kurama. there isn't a much better way to spend the day than licking condiments off one's love's skin. although i prefer caramel or butterscoth. it's thicker, sweeter, requires a great deal more tongue action, and keeps him writhing...heh. went off on a tangent there. apologies. honestly, who wouldn't want a chocolate-coated hiei served up for dessert? or, hell, anytime. it's too, too cute how adorableness hiei is in your fics. i love it. can't wait for the next installment...the bath! bwa ha ha ha ha !!!! heh. love and best wishes. ja ne. Meli-chan.
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
from kawaii to out-right KINKY!!!! oh yeah!! lovin' it big time!!

laters!

miko ~_^
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm chocolate
person Zeenath
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
She does have it Bad *smirk* Yukina's got her wraped around her little finger ^-^ Chocolat... and... hot sexy smut ^-^ can't wait for the rest ^-^
Keep up the good work ^-^
person Meli Christophorous
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! you're back! i read your other yyh fic when you were doing the every other friday updates so i think i can handle the wait....except for when it cames to the smut. smut soon please? i love your take on the characters although i must say you've made hiei a GREAT deal more cuddly than i'd taken him for. i love it tho. kudos. and yusuke...i love the more grown up, more demonic yusuke. in the last fic i kept laughing my ass off at most everything he said. great sex too. GREAT SEX SCENES. dude...tell me you have some form of idea how great they are. write more please? i'm almost too proud to beg, but not quite...please? heh. good to see you have returned on the yyh side. welcome back.
ja ne. Meli-chan.
person Moiira
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I love the jaken reference it IS funnier that way
YAY!!! ^-^ new chappie! ^-^ can't wait for the rest
...poor koenma HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! ^-^ See ya ^-^
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhhh a kawaii chappie!!!! bring it!!!

laters! ~_^
miko
person kitkit
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice
i can't wait to see what yusuke has in store for koenma
person Raholea
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're right, it is funnier to imagine him as Jaken..... *snickers*

and no, i'm not a "good girl" but i can behave like a good fangirl. well, whatever behaving classifies for them as. i'm a Naruto addict, and i keep driving myself nuts waiting for each new chapter to come out in the manga... *sighs*
and your work is right on that list. the things i wait to check on every week to get my itch taken care of. *grins*

and i didn't come up with the nickname, sadly. not all of it. well, the rank was a gift. the rest of it's mine. ^^ *waves* i can't wait to see Hiei in the middle! I love your lemons!!!!!!!!! *glomps*