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for One Does Experiment

by thothmoon

person NyteKit
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I like this story, and I'm really glad you're continuing it. Latter part, yes, very squicky. Never heard of that fetish but for some reason I'm not too surprised that Yomi would try it. On Kurama, specifically. The first half of the story was hilarious. Love that bit in the library, as well as the nickname donning by the orange girl. And I'd really love to see Kuwabara's reaction if he knew Kurama hadn't been joking! Not really sure where you're going with this story, but I'm sure it'll be good. Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“Right. Because an office job’s much more distracting”—he took care that his voice was low—“than fighting demons.”.

I laughed so hard at that line. I think that was my favourite line in the chapter. And what does Kurama have around his neck? A collar? Huh? I want to know.

Loving the Yomi/Kurama and the Kaito/Kurama pairings. May I see Kuwabara/Kurama in this too? Just curious.
person 66Hiei08
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pulling up the chair at my laptop for yet another great story from you. Indeed, I did read Graduation and I thought it was very good. No doubt this one will be a bit.. ummm.. juicier?