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for Midnight Madness

by ichigokun

schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, that added dialogue right before the scene switch made it much smoother ^^

So, I like how (Mishima!)Sensui strikes Toguro as sane and reasonable. I think that definitely illustrates Toguro's ah, somewhat warped logic, no? And I like that little connection to Miyuki; we don't normally see her mentioned in fanfic and it is a plausible link if we want to go through this angle of Toguro.

And Itsuki's still a transparent liar XP But then what would he care, it's all an air anyhow and it may have been a taunt to flaunt that Sensui won. And Elder Toguro's as Brother-clingy (huh ... he actually does cling to him, doesn't he? Hehe, Word Choice) as in the show, maybe a tad bit ... hm, that'd be an interesting pairing. But anyhow--good ficcage; yea IC crack!