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Hm. Agaliarept's met Yusuke before. That just really really reinforces this notion I have as to who he might be; although, he could also be.... And then I was thinking on something that was said a few chapters back, and I wonder, Will that person pop up somewhere?

... Well, if you can be vague, I can be vague *nods*

By the way, chapter before last I really liked the Yusuke-Toya dialogue. You've got the ice master so well-characterized in this story.

So that's what bothers Toya. Now I'm just wondering about what Yusuke knows that I don't, why isn't Kurama going to be one of the three rulers of Makai? What is to become of him then??

Very interesting Shishi and Suzuka portrayals in these two chapters (we see what was up with Shishi, but what the heck was with Suzuka getting sort of trippy back there?). Those two are characters if you know what I mean, so it was cool to see some primarily one-on-one stuff going on there.

Keeping all doors open, ne? I'll keep my hopes up for a future romantic relationship between Hiei and Yusuke^_^ More pieces to Kuramas puzzle I like that, even if it's fannon^_^

You've made me curious. I actually though that Hieis reasons for going to Gandara was for making a diversion and spying on Shura, but now it's all about his hidden desire? And what are Banashima hinting at before the two guards interupted him and Hiei? Anyway, nice start for the sequel, I'll be waiting for the next chapters^_^

Playing around a little with the Yusuke/Hiei suggestion, ne? I like Hiei's fucking around with the patrolmen; he's diverting for the others, isn't he?

I have my ideas about the thing in the lab, but I'll wait a bit before I lean towards any one.

Oh, by the way--a little ways into Chapter 3 you call Kandero a "nage," in case you're interested.

Hah, a drugged Kuwabara.

So the Forest kind of brings out a sort of demonic PMS, eh? This should have interesting effects, it seems that Shishi and Lazurama are feeling it most so far. And Yomi offing Kuronue in a rivals' quarrel sort of thing? (Actually I read a fic once by I think the Chuckling Corpse where Yomi tried slitting Kuronue's throat ... then totally, ah, getting it.) Hm ... it deviates from the canon, but so do a few of the story's more prominent details as well, sort of, so I guess we can let it slide (though that would sort of mess up the "amnesia fading!" part of the movie *shrugs*). Interesting start, looking forward to what may be found in the Forest, and future demonic PMS-ing XP