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Something big's coming. Or rather, they are going to it, eh? I wonder what Yomi and Kurama said to each other in the cave, but previous bits of the story have also alluded to something very big and very disliked by the people obligated. But this installment--the entire shin-dig, not just the chapter--did a good job of stitching together everyone, even if things aren't fully healed, so they can pursue whatever's coming next. Looking forward to it.

I'm so sorry about not having replied lately, but for the three weeks I've been working for about twelve hours every day>.< But I've enjoyed the last few chapters of the sequel as much as the rest of the story^_^ And I'm glad for the tiny chat Kuwabara had with Hiei, it did shed some more light about the whole Kuwabara-sleeping-with-Keiko mess. Oh, and I'm quite curious about Shuras 'son'. Technically isn't he Hieis son as well? Anyway I'm looking forward to "A New Situation"^_^

I don't often review, but I want you to know that I DO read each chapter and I am thoroughly enjoying this story... and indeed, this entire saga!

So the proud Gandharan bloodline is continued with ... little Hiei? That'll be an interesting discovery for the others; looking foward to it.

Oh--seriously, that simple? Once a week? Weird ^^

So Shura's become a little Frankenstein, has he? I was figuring it'd be something like that. This should get interesting....

Oh yeah, I'm around XP And the annoying LOTR character that I believe you're thinking of is Gollum. If the Ring were a drug (and you could definitely make convincing comparisons), Gollum would be like the total crackhead of the story *nods*

Cool that you gave George some action, poor guy. He's always getting kicked around by Koenma but you know he doesn't hate his boss, in the series or in this story (duh). And suckage for Lazurama ... I think if I'd been him I'd have been a little more obviously pissed--ah, but he's probably doing good to just be more wistfully upset with it (I guess he was on allotted time anyhow) since he hasn't been processed yet, eh?

And I want to know what Yusuke's little ritual is. (Hopefully it hasn't been mentioned before and I've just forgotten it.) And it looks like Kurama might be intending to spy???

Sorry for the late review, but I've been extremely busy lately>.< I don't always get ff.net, they have some weird rules, sorry to hear that your story was deleted.

I know that Banashima just wanted to protect Hiei, but I can't help whishing for a different outcome of the fight;-)
I really like the way you described Kuramas dillema; cold fury which made him able to kill the tribe of wolfes, and thus obeying his demon nature (and laws), though he gets second thoughts afterwards and feels guilty and the way he reacts to that guilt. Nice Done^_^

So sorry I haven't been reviewing lately; had to get caught up. And also sorry about the ff.net issues; that sucks.

I read the ending of this most recent (12th, right?) chapter and thought of the ending of Fellowship of the Ring (oh crap, now that I think about that, there's more than just the mountain similarity, haha...). Poor Lazurama (Boromir? heh), and Hiei found his dad only to lose him pretty quickly. But the fire demon death scene was kind of cool. Sort of like the phoenix burning up, just not coming back. Or the Jewish thing about the soul's flame rejoining G-d's big massive fire.

So you know I want to see this meeting. *obnoxious kid voice!* Are we there yet? XP

Why did Banashima have to interfere? If he hadn't Hiei would have killed that mage and Banashima would still be alive! I feel so sorry for Hiei, to loose his father so quickly. I can't wait till they beat that brat to Shura!

You are a cruel, cruel author! How could you end it like that? Does this means that Banashima will have to die in order to kill Kandero? I want to what Hiei will do! Please update soon^_^