rate_review Reviews

well so far I ust say im as hooked on this story as just about every one u write!!... i read what u wrote about getting so few reviews and i felt kinda guilty frankly lol. Ive been reading ur stories for years now i guess. i check 4 ur updates at least once a week and the only way i keep my self from crying at the end of each story is by reminding myself that ur going 2 have another story out soon.... and yet.... i never review lol... well i think ive reviewed 2 times but thats it... and i send friends 2 read ur stories all the time lol. SO! as 4 this story I can c so many twists and turns this can take! Im already on egg shells! I wonder if hiei remembers and is playing dum or if he really did forget... hhmmmm..... I cant wit 2 find out! I hope 2 c an update soon!!!!!!!

He's going to FREAK when he realizes the baby is his and not the rapist's. Nice work!!!

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

hey there! this is really a great start! action and emotion are very well-blended and balanced. very good characterizations, especially with the gang being oh-so protective of kurama. i like hiei's hidden concern and kurama's stubbornness. seems to be a very good start, fast-paced and action-packed. set the ball rolling for more emotion. hmmm., wait. did you answer whether kurama did get raped? i seem to have missed that, although the hint of him looking at hiei told me he wasn't. anyways, hope to read more soon!

Absolutely awesome!! Well except that Kurama could have been raped. When Yoko grabbed Hiei's throat I wanted to scream and jump around at the awesomeness. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! I hope Hiei remembers soon though!