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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like your fanfic, it has an awesome story line and you don't jump around like a lot of fanfic writers do so I can stay interested in it and not get confused by what is happening. I think you should make it a Hiei/Kurama/Yusuke story, those are always the best fanfics.
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the story so far sounds okay. the drama between heai and kurama will only build up for the suspense that will break out between yusuke and kurama so i don't think you should make it a yusuke/kurama/heai story. not that it wouln't be hot its just that i believe a story to be better if there's a reason for all the drama.
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August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far. I think a threesome would be a great ideal.update soon
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!