rate_review Reviews

I adored it!!!!

(Not much the beginning, the whole mysterious-scary act) but ohmygod the story and the prejudice (awfull one that we have) along with their stronger relationship were great!

Fantastic ^^

PS: going to read the sequel rigth now

That was great! I hope one day I can write as good as you. Where did you learn how to use so much detail? It's amazing, as if the reader is actually there. You're like an artist painting the perfect picture with every letter you write. Please keep writing more stories, you're a wonderful author and I would love to read anything you write.

"Love and Protection"...?

Ummm.. This story is really getting good. I love that you're bringing in new characters. I also love your unique view on Shiori's reaction. I think it is very realistic of how any mother would, or at least 'should' react to this kind of a situation. Whether her child was a male or a female. Nod, nod. P.S. The sex is good, too, although I don't really care too much for excessively heavy S & M stuff.. I just can't wrap my brain too much on how pain can be a turn on. When I write, if I portray pain it's usually more in the 'humiliation' vein, but that's just me. :o)

Oh my. I read this last night and almost had to go to bed with a nosebleed. First off, the addition of Karasu and Kuronue made me very happy, then you added in the whole Ai no Kusabi pet thing, which is also golden, and then you had Youko make Shuuichi airtight with vines. *applause* That lemon was incredibly hot and you really have a nice writing style. I also liked your portrayal of Karasu - he's a favourite of mine and you made him nice and sadistic.

Keep up the crazy-hot lemons! And Youko's dirty talk? *dead*

I loved it. Your descriptiveness is wonderful. And the scenes were... SPETACULAR. I hope there's more. I really want to read more.

OH YOU WROTE MORE OF THIS. That shower scene was crazy-hot, Youko is just one pile of extreme sensuality and Shuuichi is totally overwhelmed. I like that Shuuichi is masochistic and Youko takes advantage of it. Poor things though, I hope Youko can figure out some way to keep Shuuichi young and vibrant, and I know he's going to have problems bringing him back to Makai. Youko's probably broken a couple of rules already...

And that last chapter at the police station was so funny. Youko just doesn't care about the police or Shiori...LOL.

Hey i really like this story so keep it up ok and i want to know when the next chapter is coming up.

I have one word 4 u my dear writer.... H...O...t... HOT!!!

yes u are very very evil and please don't take too long to update. and the story is great. :)