rate_review Reviews

Phew...I finally caught up to the current chapters. Sorry I haven't reviewed before now because I love to read you work. I really like how you're taking the characters and slowly developing them your own way, they are different from the show but you make it beleivable through events.

I also like your script style, it's refreshing and I can almost see each chapter played out, but why are you always explaining and apologizing for it? It's your fic, you can write the way you feel comfortable, and readers who don't like it and choose not to read are missing out on something good IMO.

I'm not very good at critques so I won't go much into details, but I can say that I look forward to every new chappy. Great work, I'm sitting on the edge of my seat wondering what's gonna happen next.

I like this. I'm especially interested in Hiei's brother and the spells that Hiei has. It seems he hasn't recovered from his time in the brothel as well as he'd like others to think. I have a feeling it's going to give him problems if he doesn't deal with it soon.

Keep posting, I'm dying to see what happens next!

looks like things are gonna get worse before they get better. i just hope the brothers get there in time before something happens to yukina or kasaba. update soon ^^

Poor dude had to lose his arm,at least it'll grow back.This story is jsut as intense has the others and I very much look forward to the next update.

Okay, I've read Chapter the Second through Chapter the Ninth (I think) in this sitting. I like that even after being murdered Shizuru's still as piss-fire as always ^_^ Hiei's devotion to our comatose He-Banshee was endearing; Yusuke's horny (understandably, given current events); but at least Kurama's hormones aren't impeding his judgment just yet (though as you said, Yusuke wouldn't have done anything *too* stupid).

I'm wondering if the relationship between Hiei's brother and the vampire (by the way, Hiei's obviously heat-influenced description of said vamp was hilarious) is some sort of D/s affair. Also, Hiei and Kurama are going into heat, albeit that's somewhat thanks to the Hot Juice, but I wonder if there'll be any similar cycle on Shishi's behalf even though he's inactive. Hm... Well, shall exercise patience with ze dial-up to read and review again soon (I know I'm rather behind right now; forgive me).

Just want to tell you how much I appreciate this story, its really great^_^ Though I do feel sorry for Hiei, why does the bad thing always happens to him? Not that I'm complaining, he's kinda cute wen he's suffering;-)

Oy--just letting you know that I do know of this story's existence and I have not been ignoring it. Last week I was in the middle of moving back here from school; my room's still more like that storage place I sleep in versus my room; and the Internet connection here is so godawful *touchy*--that's why I've been away and haven't read and reviewed yet. Anyway, I've just now finished Chapter 1. My, you do have the Hiei Torture Fetish, no? (Well, if it took me till just now, after the previous three stories, to figure *that* one out, shame on me!) His sister and his grandson in possession of less than savories, and the story's just begun! I did like the interaction between Yukina and Shizuru and the child who seems to have been lucky enough to escape the name he originally had, before the demons attacked, though. That was cool. Well, I find my connection here intolerably slow presently, but rest assured I'll be caught up soon and let you know via review what I think, of course. Later!

So very happy you decided to update this.With the wait I thought maybe you were not going to.Anyway,
Wow did you really have to kill off poor Kewa's sister and so soon in the story to.Can't wait to see how
Hiei, Kurama and Yusuke wil react to this news as well.Looking forward to the updates.