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Ah, so Shishi went to the wrong body. Well, at least he'll get to have cool-colored hair again, and he'll still be around Hiei so I don't see any major damage there.

Sucks that you killed off Pehjo! Ugh, but you did characterize him a lot beforehand, and it's redeemable because of everything that happened due to it. Good job weaving everything together; it's all becoming pretty whole... And making Mukuro have a braint tumor was pretty original. A lot of people like to just make her this pissy little bitch, but you gave an actual cause for her, uh, eccentric behavior.

And I loved that scene where Yusuke was watching the kids' tail-play all "Okay ... I'm growing concerned"-like. One of the funnier scenes while I caught up ^-^ So I definitely think we're in the falling action; looking forward to what happens next.

Thank god for family.I really thought you might have let Hiei go.I lost this bet, since you wrote it where do you want me to send the cookies I have to make.Yomi looks like he'll have his hands full as well.Great bunch of chapters and I can't wait for the next one.

Please tell me your going to let Hiei live through this to at least see his children and his brothers kids grow up
somewhat.Wow Yomi's thoughts should be going around in circles with everything he could get out of this.
Still very much hoping you let Hiei live.

Poor Yusuke must feel stuck between a rock and a hard place,and great sex or not can't be happy about being put to sleep as it were.Poor Hiei,it brings tears to the eyes.Yet I still think that his (Hieis')kids have something up their sleeves.

Wow,chapter 74 already,And what are you doing!,Now your killing Ryo's mate as well,there'll be motherless demon
babies all over demon world.It seems that Hiei's kids may be coming up with a plan (hopefully).The edge of the seat is an understatment.Yet I can't wait to see what happens.

I wish I could read and review as fast as you update, but I've been here and I'm reading!

It's such a bad situation for Yusuke, and now for Ryuji. I mean, they want to save their mate, but they also can't kill and innocent child/children. I don't know who's situation is worse: Hiei's because he's so angsty and thinks he deserves to die (which is so sad), or Ryuji's since he only got to spend a short time with his mate and now his mate's going to die. I like that you aren't afraid to kill off characters.

I also like that you've written in the children's reactions, and Imiko and Chiisai wondering just how they're related was adorable. I just hope Mukuro can stop being such a bitch and help Hiei when he needs it. Maybe Yomi will convince her otherwise.

Chi's kicking Charlie Brown's ass right now, you know? Poor kid shouldn't beat himself up so much--he's, what, like the youngest kid there right now? Duh he can't do the things the others can! (Of course, most kids lack the logic utilized by most adults...) Maybe his visit with Hiei will at least keep him from playing winter bear again.

I know I haven't reviewed in a while and am really sorry.The only thing I can offer is (life happens and gets in the way)Any way,A sense of dread fills me reading the newest chapters to think that Chi is going to follow Hiei.What will Kurama do now that he knows about this?Maybe Yusuke and Koenma can use this to help change Hiei's mind on his fate.Or maybe Chi can sneek some energy to help Hiei.I can't wait to see what else happens
great job as always

Ryuji/Pehjo. Finally. There was definitely something starting before. And Kirin in the middle of Ryuji's and Mukuro's feud, hehe. I can relate to that position.

I like the bit of Koenma humor in this most recent chapter. Okay, I'm gonna take another guess--and yes, I'll attribute my so far clouded perception to your having a lot going on, hehe--and this guess would be that it has something to do with Hiei and Imiko/Kasaba. And if that one's true, well, that was pretty much handed me, so ^^

So will we be revisiting Mukuro anytime soon? I want some progress with Hiei's predicament.