rate_review Reviews

Glorious! Brilliant! Your writing is so beautiful! I'm going crazy right now!! I'd love it if you continued the story!

That was very well written! I admire the way you made it all so believable. Many others who attempt this pairing make is awkward at best. I feel so bad for both of them at the end of this!

T_T! You rewrote this? I thought you've put up something new or updated *sniff* I've been checking constantly!
On another note, your hiei/yukina fics are always worth reading over again.
You kinda left me hanging on Thrill of the Forbidden, *on bended knees* please update it, I'm begging u 4 my sanity.

Is everyone afraid to review this or something?

This is just what I would imagine in a properly executed Hiei/Yukina fic. She of course is innocent as a consequence of being ignorant. He wasn't in the most rational state of mind, and after there was remorse and perhaps even horror. You described everything with enough detail, but not so overboard that you sounded some one of those sappy paperbacks they sell at the grocery stores XP And I don't even read incest fics of any sort as a rule (this is the archetype of the exception). Hopefully more people review this; it deserves as much.