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Double-timing? Ah, foreshadowing of a flashback, no? So two of the parties have met now, now I'm waiting either for Hiei to catch up to them and/or for them to locate ... see if I can spell his name right without going back and checking ... Agaliarept? Anyway, looking forward to the next scene.

A very short chapter, but not disappointing at all--I could so completely envision everything in my mind, as though it were a scene from a show. Also I like it when plants "talk"; you'd think given Kurama's abilities there'd be more of that in fanfiction *shrugs*

Ah, so that's why he knew about the honor of fire. Hm, Kurama has a relative--maybe Hiei does too?

Shura's demented! And deluded. Shall be interesting to see what occurs next!

Ah, so Yusuke and "Clint" are off to meet this Agaliarept fellow, so soon I'll be able to see if my inklings are true or not ^_^ But geez, Shura's so ... lots of people are dying thanks to him! Little brat's got a lot to account for when they get him.

Hunch as to who Agaliarept is.

Oh, much Kuwabara-beating in that chapter! Poor guy. Oh well, I suppose the others are nipped at as well, so it's not so horrible. Well now, Kurama may be cleared soon, now just to stop Little Brother before he does anything *too* damning...

*laughs* Naturally, Suzuka of all people would notice the difference between Kurama and Lazurama. Well, maybe with the exception of Shishiwakamaru XP

But Enma sure should delve deeper into his intelligence before making such rash decisions. Oh, but wait, that's right: he's a politician. You're very realistic to that degree, haha.

So that's the relation! I suspected that Kurama and Lazurama might be something like that. And your hint at Yusuke and Kuwabara is piquing as well. Much drama and action to come, no?

And as far as people biting so far, it took a bit before your other stories caught on also. I'll continue promoting!

Ah, so Lazurama's being coerced...

Um, Durga is an incarnation of Parvati, one of the chief goddesses in Hinduism. As far as the woman you have made Koenma's mother in this story, I don't know offhand. But Enma himself in the series is sort of a blend between the Japanese deity and his Indian counterpart (Yama), so making a Durga Koenma's sister is feasible.

I recall that in the series Enma was a bit of a ... yeah, at times, and you're reflecting that well in this story. Now let's hope Durga prevents him from inflicting the wrong thing on the wrong person, yeah?

Okay; at first I had thought that Kurama's doppleganger was a shape-shifter, but then thought not, and this confirms that? I still wonder if there is some sort of relation between the two, other than the identity theft. And Kuwabara's vocab--we *do* use bigger words in college (finally I can carry a conversation without pausing to define something). Another great chapter XD

So--Mukuro might not be dead? Interesting...

Some action-y chapters you have here. (Poor Toya; I've seen rambunctious passengers before, but man...)