rate_review Reviews

Hey there! I know it's been a while since you updated, and it's probably strange getting a review out of the blue, but I was wondering if you've given up this story? I hope not, but the prospects of you continuing it seem bleak. Anyway, I was just going through some old favorites and reread this one. I still enjoy it.

So if you do come back and write more, I look forward to it. If not, at least know that someone still reads it.

I love how great this story is! Haha I can already tell our little Hiei is going to get quite angry over all the attention Aka will be showering upon Kurama! Please update soon! XD

Cheers,
Fangirl66

DUDE. RANDO.

This is a most intriguing mission, and already we can see there are going to be some problems. I love how the transformation is making the boys' less controlled. You made it a great way to particularly give more insight to the way Hiei thinks and acts, like his disdain for irritating people no matter what form he's in, and in general there's such a personal quality to all of the descriptions here that I don't see in many other fics. I laughed several times at the sarcasm. Great job!

Awsome is all i can say.
update soon ^^

I think that, despite your concerns, the chapter flowed very well and you managed to get in a lot of the plot points without overloading or confusing the reader. I so enjoyed Rando's appearance and how each of the Reikai Tantei were shifted into kitsune form. Hiei must look so cute! And Yusuke and Hiei's rough-and-tumble fight was very amusing. I always enjoy reading your stories, I get absorbed from the beginning and just ride with it. I can't wait for more!

Me luvviess sequels.. Got high hopes for this one ;o)

Fanfic art for chapter "Internal Conflict" posted here:
http://amiwryn.deviantart.com/art/Hiei-Kurama-93444008

umm really cant complain about the spread of OCC (dun dun dunnn) cause Hiei was occ the minute his dialogue exceeded 15 words

*runs up and huggles ya* I am very very sorry if i sounded (god is that even a proper word) so negative on my last review. unfortunately my sarcasm runs a bit deep. You and your lovely writting style are like butterfly kisses in a worid of sweat covered fornacating smut lover, sweet and refreshing. Please give your muse a cookie. ^and now i wait............yep. *sigh* contest unfair to those whom cant draw however i do draw a excellent stick figure. *runs off to get art supplies* *cough* get the posting my friend reviewers arent a patient bunch, well fine i am not.

Huzzah for chapter 2! That lemon scene where Hiei was desperate and needy but couldn't acknowledge it was heartbreaking. I especially liked how you put Don't...Don't leave...Don't leave me...Don't leave me alone! throughout it. Very well-written. I'm glad that Kurama is stable enough, and Hiei is trusting enough, to out the problem and deal with it. At least they're acting maturely and discussing it and Hiei is learning...

I can't help but worry about this upcoming mission though...

You write so well, I can't wait for chapter 3!