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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, this is starting out to be a really cute story. I like it so far and am looking forward to the next installment. Hiei can be so cute when he is trying to hide what he really feels from people.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is good so far. I like that you've portrayed Kuwabara as intuitive versus the popular moron fandom depiction, and the commentary about the auras was interesting. Oh, and the fangir1s!!1 at the beginning--oh I've loved you alway Kurama and I know you would love me too, plus giving her an obviously non-Japanese name totally conjured up the image of the standard Mary Sue; excellent satire (even if it was unintentional)! Now, if Hiei's going to be living at least four months with Kurama, I wonder how many "morning woods" they'll endure before something more happens, hehe...
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like the beginning of another of your wonderful stories. I hope to see the updates quickly. (My daughter is due soon and I would hate to miss anything.) My son barely gives me time to my self as it is. Your stories have improved so much over the last couple of years. I can't wait to see how this one goes. Not too angsty I hope(is that a word?)
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As always...you write the most awesome stuff! Your gift truly is remarkable! I so can't wait for more!
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If I'm not mistaken I've seen this story before.Did you maybe do it on fanfiction.net?Or start it and not do it?I don't know,anyway I look forward to watching Hiei grow in to Kurama.And Kurama show his love for his firebaby.I have a feeling their in for a lot of mess first though.Can't wait for the next chapter and hope its soon.