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I like what you are doing with this fic. The different twists and turns in it are keeping me on my feet and I'm wondering how on Earth the little twisted threesome is going to work itself out - not to mention who it is that our favourite spirit dectective is in love with! Looking forward to the next chapter and hope that your family stuff settles down.

Chapter 3 was great.It might be nice to see Youko lose his hold on Hiei and let the human side Kurama have what he needs for once.What a way to blow the youko off to(good going for Hiei).I'm very sorry to hear about your brother,I went through something simular with my grandmother in a hospise and it was an emotiomal rollercoaster.My thoughts are with you through this.Great job

WOW!!!that was definitely a new twist!!i never could have expected it!!brilliant!!anyways, on to my review. ok. i like the premises of the story, especially the fact that they(kurama and hiei) don't just immediately fall into bed. im excited to see how your going to work with both parties believing their love is unrequited. i also like hiei's growing closeness with yukina and of course, kuwabara's self-sacrificing love. i am now absolutely nuts trying to guess who yusuke's secret love is. i actually thought he was the one hiei would be sharing his nights with. the twist of youko's appearance makes this story all the more exciting and i guess challenging on you part. i was a little saddened when i read that it was youko, not kurama, he submitted to. and the fact that youko was just using him brought out conflicting emotions. its really great. hope you never run out of inspiration for your story! am looking forward to the next chapter. (^-^)

Wow..........i hope you update soon. i really love this story. ^_^

Wonderful 'twist' in the story. I can't wait to see what you have planned for Yusuke. Poor Hiei, trapped between the fox and the human. Yes, the update got to me just fine before the baby. After a few shots of stuff to slow things down, we should even make it to our due date.

Ooo, that devious little youko. Poor Hiei isn't equipped for this kind of dilemma. Can't wait to see how this turns out. I just love a good mind game.

This sounds really good.Keeping Youko separte is an interresting idea.Even so though they share the same mind
the human half is going to find out (with or without Youko saying anything)or at least he should,it could be fun to watch both halfs talk this problem out.Poor Hiei stuck between a Youko and a hard place (hehe),and who does Yusuke want?are we getting a threesome or is it Kewa.Either way that sounds like fun.Can't wait for the next update and very greedly hope its soon.

OMG...... I really hate typing omg, but..... OMG..... That was to good.... Hoe in the world do u come up with such amazing stories? And each one is so different. I wish I was half as good as u r at this. And I cant wait to see what ur doing with our detective. I have one idea that would be supper good, and i hope u do it lol. But back to the story. Should i be worried about y both foxes r call hiei a little dragon? Humm. Is there more then what we see going on here? Considering that its one of ur stories I now there is.... But what is it.... Pretty PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!!! ((Hey Im a reviewer. u knewn that was coming.))

I really like what you've done with this so far. It was really hot. It'd be cool if you did a threesome with Yusuke, but I do like how it is going even without that.

Ooooh I really like this!

Its been so long since Ive a great YYH fic! Please update soon! I love this!

Do you have this posted on FF.net? I want to add it to my Alert and FAVs Lists!

Again great stuff, cant wait to read more!