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for SWEET DREAMS DRAGON

by ShioriFoxiesMom

person kerbear
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very cool chapter and oh yes please!I'd love to see Yusuke and Koenma go at as well.Poor Kurama though,the
red head must be feeling very left out with Hiei.I can't wait for the next chapter.Koenma's father may also have some explaining to do and maybe leave them alone a while(maybe not).Anyway,
great job as always
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love the idea u came up with. and im sure everything will flow smoothly. ^^ great chapter.
person Niiro
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is still as great as ever! I must say, you made me very happy! This is the first fic in which I've read that King Emma's love life was mentioned OR where Hiei confesses to Yukina(usually in fics she already knows or doesn't).

Anyhow, great work! I'll be waiting for more!!
person kerbear
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Writters block or not it was a chapter worth waiting for.What a 3 some Hiei Youko and Kurama make.If only the 3
could sit down and talk to each other(maybe not)Any way,even with the wait it was a great chapter and I look very much forward to the next update.
person Kaibasmom
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it..I am sorry you feel that you are having trouble with this story because I think it is turning out to be one of my favorites. Your stories have grown more complex and I am sure that makes it harder to write but it makes for a great read. Keep it up
person Kaibas Mom
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I have taken so long to review. My daughter, Rin, came 10 days late and I have been busy with her and Kaiba. Wanted to let you know that I am still reading and loving the story. I hate to hear that the story is changing from what you wanted but I am really enjoying it. Can't wait to see what you do with HieixKuramaxYoko triangle. Plus, the new Emma twist is great.
person kerbear
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Short or not I'm glad you didn't wait to post it.It was a good chapter and one both demons needed.Youko is way to silent though and that can't be good.It feels like Youko and Kurama will be having it out on their own soon about Hiei.Gotta learn to share :)Nice job as awlays
person Niiro
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! A fabulous chapter! It seems to me that Yoko isnt so much jealous as he is trying to get the 3 of them together...Shuichi is the jealous one!! Lucky/Poor Hiei!! He has the 2 hottest guys after him!!

So you must update soon! I'll be waiting!
person Megan
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know I could review here without an acct!
Wow!
damn!
really i've just read all 7 chapters and I am super hooked! I'll probably find this on ff.net and add it as a fave. I'm 'Siriusly Megara' on there.
this story is really amazing. i love that yoko and kurama are like two different beings.
the yusuke/koenma is a little weird to me. but oh well!
i'm sorry about your brother.
i have an older (and only) brother. i don't know what i'd do without him.
so please continue this story. it's fab!
person Bobrocks
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really interested in seeing where this is going. I think I know what Youko's intentions are but I'll keep reading to see. Update soon.