rate_review Reviews

Holy fucking hell! Bless the gods of Yaoi for inspiring you to write this fic! This was the most amazing Kurama/Hiei story I have read to date. I kind of expected the whole separating soul thing, well not exactly. I kind of expected/hoped that Kurama and Youko would both eventually have their own bodies so that this sexy threesome could form. Low and behold, my prayers to the Yaoi gods were answered, and you wrote it amazingly. Good job, I commend you on this amazing work of Yaoi fiction. A+++!


~Reigh~

Ooohhhhhh...I liked the twist at the end, I never saw it coming that both Shuuichi and Youko would be there. And that lemon at the end was hot, I've never wanted to be Hiei so much in my life.

This was a very wonderful and unique story, I think. It can stand alone, or it can continue in a sequel. Great job!!

Wow,what a chapter and a surprise.It was kinda neat to see them separate and finally see each other for
real face to face.Shiori is going to be very surprised to see 3 beings,will she still see Youko as a son/friend?
Can't wait for the next chapter and wish there was more to the adventure to see.
Great job

Poor Shiori,Losing a son and gaining a demon son.The next few hours are going to be hard on Hiei and Shiori.
I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens.Boton should be feeling the pressure of being a godling
soon.Plus I can't wait to see the faces on Yusuke's castle when he brings his new mate home.Is Koenma still a god with godling powers though or is he going to have things to get used to as well.?

AHHH! You can't just leave it there!!! We need to know what's happening! I loved the chapter, but the cliffhanger is just cruel.

Now I have heard that things come in threes, but the wedding/baby/demonic transformation is really putting our guys through the ringer! And I love it!

I know real life tends to get in the way of writing, but when you get the chance to post the next chapter, I will be more than ready to read it!

I'm so thrilled that you let Shiori accept everything with Kurama/Youko.It was neat to put in his stepdad to.
It seems theres still a way to go though for them.I can't wait to see what kind of wedding Yusuke and Koenma
are going to have.Poor Boton to will now know what paperwork really is.Great job as always,and I really look
forward to the next chapter

Yummy lil birthday surpise for me ^_^ lol. I'm glad they got things fixed with Shiori. And that was a yummy lil lemon ^_-

I think I got addicted to your writing. I stumbled on this story, finished it and then proceeded to work my way from the bottom of your page up.

I think it's safe to say that I enjoy your stories, and do hope the next chapter is updated soon. :)

As usual, I find your stories quite intriguing and enjoyable.

After reading the latest chapter, I'm beginning to think that your plan is to switch the roles of Shuichi and Yoko, or something much darker and depressing. To be honest with you, I don't think that is the best direction for your story to take. I think that there are other, much happier ways to lead this story. 1) You could have the two souls actually merge to create a perfect mixture of Shuichi and Yoko. A good look for this would be Shuichi's human form with silver ears and tail. 2) They could actually split, becoming two separate beings in two bodies. .... or 3) Have absolutely nothing happen at all! I think this would shock the reader, as they were expecting something to change. It would be a shock for the characters as well. Then they could all have a good laugh about how they were worrying and fretting over nothing. This would be quite funny and ironic. ^^;

Anyway, keep up the good work! I love reading your fics!