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Sorry, but by the time I got to reading this, the three parts were already up, so I couldn't be a loyal reviewer. But, I swear, this was such an emotional story. I was so upset at first that it wasn't going to be YxKxH, but eh, I got over it. I think what turns most people off from actually reading it, is when they notice that it's written in the script form. Honestly, when I first clicked on it, I had no intention of continuing when I noticed it would be a bit difficult to get. But, I somehow accidentally saved it to my favorites, and now I'm glad I did! I totally can't wait until the next installment! One thing that kinda amused me was that you didn't put in any swear words. Why was that? I mean, it's basically a story filled with prostitution, incest, yaoi, and the likes, so what difference does typing in 'bitch' make? Just wondering! lol

I loved it. All three. I would like to see another installment to this saga. It's been a while since I actually stuck with a saga but yours drew me in like no other has in a long time.

I hope I'm not too late to chime in and say that I'd like to see more. I really would like Hiei Yusuke and Kurama to end up together in the end, I think Hiei needs the support.

Also, you can see how many hits you get on ff.net if you log in and go to your Stats page. That tells you how many hits you get and divides it up by chapter.

Plz upload the next story, i love to read your work, I made account here just so i could ask you to continue this. It's the best series

Do you really have to ask?

I want another installment,It can't end there,theres still so much work to do with Shishi and the kids
plus welcoming Hiei back in to the fold with Kurama and Yusuke won't be all that easy either.Even if he just lives at the castle with Kurama and Yusuke at first anyway.I look very much forward to more work from you.

Sorry I haven't reviewed the last few chapters--was away. So Hiei's okay now, aside from the fact that his mate's a vegetable. And Blue's right--the Yusuke-Yomi exchange was very amusing.

I like the question mark and contemplative Hm... at the story's end--you did conclude it openly, allowing the launch of another sequel if you chose to.

Gd,you really know how to end a story to keep us coming back.Sorry I haven't reviewed till now but there were so many new chapters to go through that I just kept going till the end.Poor Shishi,are you really going to let him just fade away not knowing Hiei is there for him no matter what marks they have together.Its great to know Hiei knows that he can count on Yusuke and Kurama but lose his own mate would still be quite a blow to live with.I had tears in my eyes at the last chapter.I can't wait to see how Hiei handles a meeting on purpose or not with Touya and Jin.I sit on the edge of my seat waiting for the next set.Hope its soon

Oh man, it's almost sort of like Touya's and Shishi's personas have flipped some, eh? Well, the former's been expelled--I wonder if there'll be any more confrontation between the two, hm.

Koenma conversing with the Jagan brings an amusing image to mind. Looking forward to more.

Heh, Yusuke--even if he did have pictures of the kids, he really couldn't show them to Yomi, now could he? And if Yomi keeps obliterating all the Ganderran brothels, where's he supposed to go to get laid, HM? ^__^ I anticipate their finding Shishi again--and wonder what condition he may be in--but these two chapters were good for a bit of comic relief, at least to me they were.

So, art; how about once I'm done with Sabaktu, I take a crack at one of the coupling things you suggest, eh?