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for The Aftermath

by 66Hiei08

schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Boy, that fool broke them really bad. They won't ever be right again. Your story is really good and agnsty and I won't like it any other way. Be checking back for more.
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well hell, now that they're out of the dungeons you're just bringing back the entire cast, huh? I especially enjoy the presence of the other Makai Lords, whom you've personified VERY WELL. Yomi's not a vengeful rapist and Mukuro's not a bitch always wanting to jump Hiei's rod ^_^ I look forward to seeing what will happen with the situation between Yusuke and Kurama, and wonder when Hiei and Sabaktu (should he survive that long) will be brought out of isolation and back to the others.

Oh, and I need to rate after this, don't I? Well, shall do that promptly, then.
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and I forgot to mention in the other review pertaining to your mention of artwork in the opening notes to Chapter 2 I would be happy to take a try at it ... but could I have a prompt to get me going?
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You sure didn't waste any time in posting these scenes! Yay! I really like the sequel so far, but you leave me wondering and hoping all will be well. Time will tell, I guess. Great job and please keep up the good work.
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schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow,what a tear jerker this is starting out as.I really hope you let Kurama and Yusuke Bond somewhat here,they both need it(badly).At least my vote is for these two and not Yomi.And poor Hiei loseing His son/master,I hope they can work this out as well.It sounds like it would take Both Yusuke and Kurama to help him through this.
Wow what a great load of updates as well.You write quit well and Ilook forward to the next few chapters.