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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice Yusuke-Hiei interaction. I like how they just understand each other without speaking. And Hiei controlling Mukuro? WIN. Thank you for using Hiei's majin form, that never gets enough press. And wow - Phobos is going to have his hands full torturing Mukuro, but I don't feel good about the whole Demios factor...
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my. I'm in love with this. I hope Hiei hurries back before Yusuke sinks into depression or something. T_T Really nice fic. Can't wait for more!
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Its great to finally see an update to this story and I hope to see more of it.Poor Yusuke worring
for what would seem nothing and than Hiei being so cold to him.And Kurama stuck in the middle.Lots to sort
through,I hope the wait isn't along one to find out what happens
for what would seem nothing and than Hiei being so cold to him.And Kurama stuck in the middle.Lots to sort
through,I hope the wait isn't along one to find out what happens
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hostile takeover much? And he does it just oh so tidily too. (Er ... I'm fairly sure that "tidily" is a word.) No doubt with his analysis of the torture-visions and the way he interacted with Yusuke and Kurama that your Hiei is very IC, just sort of Hn, this is this, that is that, I'll be back--gone. I wonder, due to the visions, if he's gone to see Yukina now.
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March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I have been slacking in reviews. I enjoyed both of these chapters and should have told you so earlier than this.
That being said, I love Phobos and Deimos. I can tell you've done your research, and that makes a fanfic 10X better. Your Kurama is deliciously in-character, you do him justice. And the Hiei-Yusuke bond? Romantic, at least to me. Actually, all the bois are wonderfully in-character. It's hard to write Hiei and have him break, it's got to be done carefully and just right. You did so.
I want to see more! Is it kicking Mukuro's ass tiems nao?
That being said, I love Phobos and Deimos. I can tell you've done your research, and that makes a fanfic 10X better. Your Kurama is deliciously in-character, you do him justice. And the Hiei-Yusuke bond? Romantic, at least to me. Actually, all the bois are wonderfully in-character. It's hard to write Hiei and have him break, it's got to be done carefully and just right. You did so.
I want to see more! Is it kicking Mukuro's ass tiems nao?
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so I interpretted that teaser you gave wrong. I hadn't considered that it was likely another hallucination meant to mess with Hiei. But it appears to have come from the wrong tormentor. Hm... I'm a little perplexed, but that's good given the present content!
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter rocked...This story rocks so far. Therefore, you should update soon...Please? *grins from ear to ear and clasps hands together*
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story has an ominous name. I wonder...
Okay, you know, usually I don't like it when people make Mukuro the villain (she and Kuwabara get bashed *way* too much). But that's usually when she's portrayed as OMG Heie i will punish u 4 not b-ing my lovr and taking (insert whoever's name here) insted!!!1 Ech! Too many of those! Here, though, while she might be portrayed as a little paranoid, her manipulations are from a Machiavellian cause, which is so much more in character. So that's okay.
And we see Phobos! I know basically nothing of the actual god's attributes, so I have no idea if that feed off of fear trait was there before or if that was your invention, but either way I like (oh, that sounds a tad sadistic) how you're portraying his use of it. I think that the earlier part of the second hallucination also proves that (though it was mainly his fears for Yukina) he does under it all care for Kuwabara as well, despite their, ah, *exchanges* and what Kuwabara was saying in the scene before ^__^ I still have a hypothesis over the meaning of your title, but I won't elaborate until later on in case I'm wrong.
Okay, you know, usually I don't like it when people make Mukuro the villain (she and Kuwabara get bashed *way* too much). But that's usually when she's portrayed as OMG Heie i will punish u 4 not b-ing my lovr and taking (insert whoever's name here) insted!!!1 Ech! Too many of those! Here, though, while she might be portrayed as a little paranoid, her manipulations are from a Machiavellian cause, which is so much more in character. So that's okay.
And we see Phobos! I know basically nothing of the actual god's attributes, so I have no idea if that feed off of fear trait was there before or if that was your invention, but either way I like (oh, that sounds a tad sadistic) how you're portraying his use of it. I think that the earlier part of the second hallucination also proves that (though it was mainly his fears for Yukina) he does under it all care for Kuwabara as well, despite their, ah, *exchanges* and what Kuwabara was saying in the scene before ^__^ I still have a hypothesis over the meaning of your title, but I won't elaborate until later on in case I'm wrong.