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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow....... that was really deep........ BUT SO AWESOME!!!!!! I like your imagery and even though some of the dark stuff is creepy it is the wonderfull kind of creepy... i like your interpurtation of their relationship and their thoughts... (btw i found you through your editing for AmyMcClair You write as wonderfully as you edit lol)
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How could I have forgotten to review this? Oh, because I suck.
That lemon was hot. *fans self* When Yusuke has the second finger in and Hiei whimpers...gyah. You really know how to deliver on the smex.
And I liked the whole lesson: that Hiei needed to understand loss in the light of love, he needed to understand true loss. And Kurama was delicious as always, you wrote him perfectly.
That lemon was hot. *fans self* When Yusuke has the second finger in and Hiei whimpers...gyah. You really know how to deliver on the smex.
And I liked the whole lesson: that Hiei needed to understand loss in the light of love, he needed to understand true loss. And Kurama was delicious as always, you wrote him perfectly.
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October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
kyaaa! I loved this! So glad it all worked out. You did an awesome job. ^^
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is that the ending? It just stops in the middle of a sentence and what about the dreams and Diemos? Yusukes claiming of Hiei isn't even there. If it's the end, then it's rather disappointing.
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I found this to be a very interesting and unique concept. Good job.
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So sorry about the last review, I suppose there was a glitch or something. Gomen! I really liked this story it had a really good plot and the Yusuke/Hiei action was just great^_^
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Much much better now.Though greedily I'd still love to see more on their relationship(Hiei & Yusuke).
Shame on AFF for messing with it.
Shame on AFF for messing with it.
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And somehow I missed this story until now. I'm glad I finally found it. It's very good.
I'm a sucker for emotional and psychological torment, and using that torment in a "positive" way (relatively speaking) is brilliant. I enjoyed the little twists you gave it at the end; I particularly enjoyed the role you gave the Greek god brothers as you explained it in the end. Very creative, yet mythologically sound.
Great story and great ending!
I'm a sucker for emotional and psychological torment, and using that torment in a "positive" way (relatively speaking) is brilliant. I enjoyed the little twists you gave it at the end; I particularly enjoyed the role you gave the Greek god brothers as you explained it in the end. Very creative, yet mythologically sound.
Great story and great ending!
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wait just a minute here.How can that be the last chapter with everything unfinished?
The dreams
The brothers of woe
The conversation with Kurama
The claiming of Hiei/freeing of Hiei
Theres way to much left unsaid here to end it there,what a disapointment.
The dreams
The brothers of woe
The conversation with Kurama
The claiming of Hiei/freeing of Hiei
Theres way to much left unsaid here to end it there,what a disapointment.