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for Suprise!

by psycicfox

person kitkit
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOh man decision to make, just pick one for me
person kerbear
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wait till after the holidays for the full chapter!
Or have the cliff hanger but you have to come back with the reat
of the chapter after the holidays.MMM,hard choice but either way is fine as long
as its a full chapter.
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH THANK GOD. i thought it never was going to continue thank you thank you.
person Angelgirl
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really love the story can't wait for the next chapter!!!
person katayra
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
um. whats the difference between a 'western' shower, as you put it, and a japanese shower?

but im loving story anyway :D
person katayra
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww i love itt :D

cant wait for the next chapter :]
person kitkit
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow im so happy, them kids of yusuke's are going to be so spoil
person 66Hiei08
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been with this story all the way. Can't wait for the ending. Great job!!
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Hon, I read it and I like it. There were a few spelling errors early on (you spelled 'purpose' as 'perpous) *hehe*. Anyway, I like the story, but I think Yusuke needs to be a little bitchier about the situation. That's all. Yays ^_^
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesomeness...Yusuke giving birth would be a sight to behold. He'd probably be cussing up a storm XD I hope their kids are kawaii! Hope you update soon. Ja ne =^_^=