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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooohh... it feels a bit cliche to say this, but...
the plot thickens!
I'll be hawking over you for an update! I want to know what happens next! xD
the plot thickens!
I'll be hawking over you for an update! I want to know what happens next! xD
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh wow. I loved that last chapter. Love love love love!!! I can't wait for the next one!
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. Karasu is doing such a mind fuck on Kurama. This is very well written, drawing the reader in more and more with each chapter. At this point, I don't know if Karasu's ultimate motives are to kill Kurama after he fucks him, or if he is determined just to make Kurama his. Or if he is just trying to make Kurama crazy, lol. I'm really anxious to see what happens next.
Wonderful job with this story so far. Keep up the great work!
Wonderful job with this story so far. Keep up the great work!
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story plot, and this is the first time I've read a fanfic where Karasu would actually give Kurama a gift! ^_^
You need to work on your grammar and spelling though, other than that, do update... And Happy New Year
You need to work on your grammar and spelling though, other than that, do update... And Happy New Year
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good story so far. I like that you brought him back from the dead and are you going to tell us how or who brought him back?
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You wouldn't believe how hard it is to find a decent KaraKura fic but this was pretty damn good, if you ask me! They've been my truest OTP thus far and it's nice to see such a great fic about them. :D
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December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not sure of the purpose of that random author's note, but this story has a very good start. I really like the way you wrote both Kurama and Karasu. Very similar to their personalities in the anime. Great job! Update soon!
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December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... It sounds like Karasu is either trying to woo the kitsune or lure him into a false sense of security. Kurama's too smart for that, but he certainly seemed to appreciate the gift. I've never read the manga, so I'm not familiar with Kurama's mother saving his life. Was that part of the manga or made up? Just curious ^_^
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was not only hot, but really, really well written. I'm thinking that this is going to be an excellent Karasu/Kurama fic. Thank you for bringing us a decent story to read, finally.
I laughed so hard when I read your penname.
I laughed so hard when I read your penname.