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May 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
i love this story , and ill gladly beta you and talk it over with you , my email is ashleyfirstnamewalter@yahoo.com shoot me a line
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good first chapter. Your style is vivid and polished, but I'm still debating whether or not Kurama was OOC...true, he initially resisted to Karasu's advances, but his control broke down pretty quickly considering he was once Yoko Kurama, a force to be reckoned with. I also don't think Kurama would vulnerably tell Karasu "You haunt my dreams." At least not seconds after his appearance. Maybe after like, torture...But yeah Imma keep reading! :P
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting. I'd love to see more. =3
Sorry for the short review. My comp's about to automatically restart on me. XP
Sorry for the short review. My comp's about to automatically restart on me. XP
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...i just read all six chapters...and i can't wait for the next chapter, since this is one of my favorite pairings in yu yu hakusho^_^V
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh... eh rest?? Where?
Damn for a qliffie, just getting real good to!!
Can't wait for next update!!
Damn for a qliffie, just getting real good to!!
Can't wait for next update!!
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If what you said about Karasu is true then Kurama's going to be sorry for that. Yes, one time can hurt, Kurama. You just wait and see what's going to happen to you next. See what this author does to you next, I dare you. Nice job.
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story keep it up!
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very captivating!! please do continue :D
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Can't wait for the update.
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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i cant wait till the next chappie