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for Hot Mazoku Action

by sefiru

person amanda1
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job. Yay! reward time! I'll be waiting for your update.
person Jenova180
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter was so cute! I definitely feelin' this story and can't wait to read the next chapter! ^__^
person Asharra
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, nicely done (even if I had hoped for a little more TLC)

The best part about this is that with all the new arrivals, the chances for somebody stumbling onto the little trio goes way up! mmmmm well, most would have enough sense as to feel that amount of power... except Kuwabara and Keiko couldn't sense energy.

Update soon, PLEASE!!!
person Moiira
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the "update soon" comment but I didn't know you had an update schedule ^_^" but one things for shure PLEASE DON'T STOP WRITING *puppy eyes* it's just TOO sad when GOOD authors stop writing ^^ Well love the story ^^
person kerbear
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shiori did take everything quite well(as we knew she would)Very nice way to tell her to,showing is sometimes way better.Hiei is way to cute when he's being nice(a shock to his system )Yukina and he have alot to catch up on.The plant ride was a neat idea,I can't wait to see Shiori tour the place as well(that should prove some fun).I can't wait till friday.Great job as always
person kitkit
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooohh i love that kurama and hiei finally told their big secrets.
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww, that was soooo sweet! XD I wish I had Hiei for a brother....of course, then I'd be accused of incest. >.>; I'm looking forward to their reward...heheh...very much so.

what kind of aunt would I be if i didn't corrupt my niece and nephews? Besides, I have plenty of candy around to keep their mouths shut. ^^
person lijana
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like how you handled the 'secrets'.

So you tease us by saying there is more hot action in chp 12! You are mean and I am smitten by your tale.
person Raholea
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*gives plant demon a puzzled poke*

well, another pretty chappie from one of the best authors around!!
and i'm so glad hiei finally 'fessed up to yukina. and that shiori handled everything so beautifully.

next one is a lemon, huh?? i can't wait!!!!
smexy demons getting it on.... and yummm............... *smiles*

i'll be dancing for your next update!!!!
person Steph8503
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait. hehehe